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A Captured Beauty

bruised from a snow- capped  flesh
earth is growing numb without rest,
threadbare  plants gasp;  existence
bites the nodes of winter’s  skin

turned every which way,  bends droop
like deep chambers upon chilled meadow
striking flint, just a bit, a spark
that wants to sip a flower moist,
till darkness swallows the pistils

hush…wait when springtime ushers
a roulette of buds dyed  stark yellow
pouring dew from a cycle reborn
to seize her unmentionable thrill of being

once here, crowned hillsides glitter
igniting stars to touch the moon,
clouds dripping of raindrops’ spray
pitter patter; the gentle streams flow

while from the river, luster pours down
through an ocean igniting April’s two hands...
one  waking the flame of petals’ limbs,
the other cuddling grace of season past
a mixture of spring… wild and tender.

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collaboration of nette onclaud and liam mcdaid
thank you nette

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/2/2013 12:47:00 PM
A very nice collabo here guys! Good Work to you Liam and to your partner as well Nette! MC
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Date: 10/13/2013 9:09:00 AM
a pleasure to reel with you, liam..:) huggs
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:49:00 PM
Ah, here you are, I can properly congratulate you on a job well done one to one. Good job on this piece Nette! MC
Date: 10/12/2013 5:16:00 PM
Wowzer..this is beautiful..Nettie and you did a wonderful collab.You can here Nettie on Drake s show tomorrow..It is a very nice show..A beauty to read before i sleep
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Date: 10/12/2013 5:09:00 PM
- Ohhhh .... a skilled helper + you ... It became a beautiful poem, Liam!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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