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A Canary's Mind

Try to put feelings to thoughts, thoughts to words.. weed out angry ones, hope for forgiveness in calling card verse. beauty sings "won't be long" in clear air, beauty sings voice of the canary, what does it know of better things. Was I hard by you, did I lose track of time..? or fail to find it, the beauty inside.. that sweet voice of the canary remains lost in this mind. In a world of self judgement to reconnoiter by chance, such a force were we, in our simple made plans.. So go on now, go you were meant to fly high..! high above the mines, not here down below. Beauty sings "won't be long" voice of the canary in clear air, beauty sings for what does it know of better things.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/18/2023 1:06:00 PM

Reminds me of the poem "Why the Caged Bird Singed. We're all a bit like a caged bird, sometimes caged inside our own self-induced suffering. Sometimes we're a relationship that makes us feel caged, whether the relationship is a personal one or a professional one, like a job that makes one feel trapped. But there's hope if we embrace it as you said in the last few lines. Enjoy your day! Sara Etgen-Baker

Quoth Theraven
Date: 10/1/2023 12:50:00 AM

Sara, Thanks, just taking in a moment. Maya's belief "you never can leave (home).., you take it with you, everywhere you go". -Richard

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2023 6:17:00 AM

Beautiful poem. I enjoyed this very much :)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/12/2023 6:11:00 PM

Hello Heidi. Why does your avatar always bring a smile, mystery. Oh, and thank you. Hope your enjoying your Saturday evening. -Richard

The Situation

Date: 8/9/2023 7:35:00 PM

sounds like mid marriage. Allway remember and blame the vows. and the reasons will become different. Besides beauty will be trust. besides love will be posterity.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/12/2023 6:08:00 PM

The Situation, You know what, think I need to follow you. "fly my little nightingale // into her ear, into her heart" -Richard

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/4/2023 6:24:00 AM

Absolutely brilliant verse my good friend. So true and yes so beautiful, The canary deserves far, far better than what it gets. A fav... God bless.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/12/2023 6:05:00 PM

Hi Robert, Thanks for that comment friend. Enjoyed reading your poem 'Dare We Beat Evil With Truth And A Heavy Sledge' like so many others in a lifetime of captivating works. -Richard

Lin Lane

Date: 8/2/2023 11:05:00 AM

Hi Richard. Your lines reminded me of Maya Angelou's Caged Bird. None of God's creations should be held captive, and certainly not such a tiny creature who sings so beautifully. Canaries sacrificed so miners would be safe. That never sat right with me.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 8/12/2023 5:43:00 PM

Hello Lin, Thanks for that insightful comment. I wonder sometimes if we've lost our way. Lost an important connection to the animal kingdom and ourselves. -Richard

Miranda Hawley

Date: 7/30/2023 9:38:00 AM

Be really nice to crawl into the mind of well many of the creatures in the animal world.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/31/2023 7:50:00 PM

Hi Miranda, Thanks for the comment. Some birds give more than just song, as canaries in the coal mine. People can give more too. More than ever expected. One of the reasons I enjoy writing here on PoetrySoup. -Richard

Deb M

Date: 7/29/2023 9:57:00 PM

A very beautiful poem Quoth! Debx

Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/31/2023 7:41:00 PM

Thank you Deb! I loved your poem 'Little But Oh So Mighty' and the wonder of your dear mum. -Richard