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A Butterflys Touch

whiskers of kittens
are certainly not so soft
as butterflys touch

choosing her blossom
she lands ever so softly
delighting the rose

the lilacs heart leaps
anticipating her love
as hummingbird sings

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Date: 8/10/2019 12:19:00 AM
Enjoyed each line. It touched my heart
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/10/2019 5:53:00 PM
Thank you Anisha. I appreciate this.
Date: 8/9/2019 9:05:00 AM
amazing how light a butterfly's touch! you don't even feel it when they touch your bum...lol
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/10/2019 5:54:00 PM
When they land on me, I think "what was that?" Just kidding. I do not feel them until I SEE them and then I still do not feel them.
Date: 8/9/2019 8:34:00 AM
I like this...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/9/2019 8:49:00 AM
I liked it too. Thank you!

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