A Butterfly Inside

I feel a butterfly inside;
its wings are cramped within my breast.
The weight of flesh, o dull cocoon,
prohibits my free flight. At best
I only soar inside; my wings--
gossamer, light, remain untried.
I wait...I wait...until the day
the barred' cage is flung aside
and airy wings lift toward the skies.

I have felt this graceful creature 
flutter faintly deep inside;
then, at times, so ardently,
I think no way will it abide!
It will be loosed! Its wish to fly
will push the bars of flesh aside.
Determined is this butterfly 
to show its colors multiplied
and wing its way through azure skies.

The time is drawing near, I'm sure;
the throbbing swells within my heart.
The cumbrous cocoon, filled with life,
is bursting now, falling apart.
The butterfly is breaking free;
no more its wings will tightly furl,
but lightly spread upon the breeze 
their filmy webs, gilded and pearled...
and, then, my soul will leave this world.

Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright, 1987
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:28 PM
Hi Faye, Congratulations, in Kelly's Butterfly Fluttering By.. Sweet move... LINDA
Eastman Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 10:18 AM
This was so unique where it's you and you finally become what you' were meant to be... A beautiful winning poem. Congratulations on the win.
Gibson Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:16 PM
Thanks, Carol. I am glad you found some merit in this poem.
Stephens Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 9:56 AM
Hi Faye, Loved the descriptive complexity of your excellent poem. Well done on your placement. Regards Theresa xx
Gibson Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 4:15 PM
Thank you for your kind comments, Theresa
May Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 5:56 PM
A beautiful poem Faye...Congrats on your win
Sietesantos Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations, Faye on a great, big beautiful win!
George   Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:49 AM
Very original, creative and unique take of the butterfly. Kudo's to you, Faye. bfn Elaine
Lindley Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:41 AM
A truly great write and great win my friend. Big Congrats!!!
Merrill Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 2:19 AM
Nicely done Faye...a fine poem and a fine win. How much was the prize money? lol
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Congrats on a fine win, Faye
A. Sharma Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Wonderful n amazing write Faye ! feelings come alive in this one! congrats on top place !
Deschler Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 8:13 PM
I loved everything about this poem, Faye. The expressiveness and the metaphors were excellent! This poem is going onto my favorites list! Congratulations on your first place win!
Gorelick Avatar
June 3, 2014 at 8:11 PM
A big wow, this is terrific. Congrats. BG
Lindley Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 7:46 PM
A poem magnificently deep. Leading to the emerging beautiful ending!! Bravo!!!!!
A  Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Faye, a wonderful poem... deep...SKAT
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