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A Butterfly

I was with my daughters at their favorite playground. I watched them chase each other around the merry-go-round. Laughing and enjoying the extremely pretty day. I watched them among the other children play. I couldn't help but smile, hearing their shrieks of laughter made life worthwhile. As I watched my girls have a fun time. In my mind I began thinking of a rhyme. Something new. Life is so beautiful and it's something I value.... People found love but they lost it. Sometimes life can leave you emotionally exhausted. I thought about the two people who remain married even though it's all for show. A spouse is betrayed with a Judas-kiss. They remain married so things appear great on the surface. But why? Why live a lie? Isn't she tired from wiping tears from her eye? I can't be her samurai and protect her if she don't let me in. I told her hearts don't break they just bend. She tells me she'll never marry again. Why? Because of one guy? That's unheard of! There is only one kind of true love, but there are a thousand imitations. She knows people go through trials and tribulations! My thoughts were momentarily distracted, watching a butterfly in the sky. I thought - Be like the butterfly, be free; Hold my hand walk with me. She tells me people can't seem to stay committed. I'll be the first to admit it. She's right and I understand her pain. I lost my appetite and I thought I too would go insane. My wife left me for another man. I did not seem to understand. I searched within myself for the source. I thought I was to blame for her filing for divorce. But hey, life goes on. I need to let my friend know, I refuse to let her go through her struggles alone. I will be her back bone! As I pictured her in my minds eye. Several feet away I watched a beautiful butterfly. He had a long run if this was the same one I saw in the sky. It's wings fluttered coming closer towards me. It landed on my knee. So many bright colors and different designs were on it's wings. I heard Brianna and Jasmines voices calling to me to come push them on the swing. Their voices played melodies on my heartstrings. My mind shifted again to my friend who's like sunshine in the spring. She needs to know Cupid now has a finer bowstring! I looked up at the sky and watched the butterfly begin it's journey anew. Life is beautiful and it's something to value!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/8/2009 10:29:00 AM
Jimmy this piece is absolutely beautiful. You know I heard a long time ago that if a butterfly landed and stayed on you it brought you luck. Thank you writing and sharing today. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/8/2009 10:16:00 AM
An enchanting and beautifully written piece showing your love for your childred, for nature, and a heart that is enduring. Jimmy keep writing ,for it is lovely to read. Here on the soup, poems get lost so quickly, floating away, do not get discouraged by this, we eventually find them.
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Date: 12/8/2009 9:04:00 AM
Jimmy, Your poetry speaks for itself with truth from your endearing heart. I love the metaphor of the butterfly. I know one day it will guide you and your children to your new passage way. When you find it I'm sure that'll be the time your destined love will be waiting for you.We all are enjoying getting to know you through your poetry. You can see here you've now got a following.Your among friends here. Keep writing and we'll keep reading! You should be getting my christmas card soon.Love Patty
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Date: 12/7/2009 11:20:00 PM
My dear young man: this is a perfect example of "slam" poetry! Not "free verse." It is absolutely excellent, although I would work on the rhythm a bit. Also, try to use fewer exclamation points. Let your words speak the surprise/excitement. I am adding you to my favorite poets. Let me know if I can mentor you, if needed, with your poetry. ***Danielle***
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Date: 12/7/2009 10:08:00 PM
This is a very emotional write. Your words speak with the so much compassion and the desire to see someone you care about have better. Sad but beautiful and so well penned. Peace, love, and light be with you and your friend~ Lolita
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Date: 12/7/2009 9:41:00 PM
A Butterfly,so beautiful the kife of a butterfky is,The butterfly is full of colors,wild and free,We all love to be that Butterfly,don't We?living on flowers in a garden of dreams,but reality is dIfferent,i hope your friend will be able to move on to find happiness and love,to find the happiness like the little girls in the poem and im sure you ll be there for support,because that is true friendship and im sure your heart is loyal!Life isnt always easy,but i beleive all happens for a reason,,C
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Date: 12/7/2009 9:05:00 PM
this is a great poem jimmy, i enjoyed your words very much and the visuals you gave. It's true there is only one true love, but the imitations are very hard to see through till it's too late. very great write here sir.
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Date: 12/7/2009 6:26:00 PM
Life is just like your butterfly, Jimmy, free and eager to fly but sometimes it rests.. just like love too.. such terrific lines in this poem.. I will post a blog for Soupers to read and enjoy and get to know u and your poetic talent... blessings... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/7/2009 4:18:00 PM
Beautiful story, Jimmy, Thanks for writing and sharing! Peace and love, Audrey
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