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A Bush Fire

A BUSH FIRE One scorching afternoon, A sudden splintering sound was heard, The nearest was the buffalo herd, They smelt the smoke and felt the heat, And began to charge, they had to beat, The, scorching red hot fire. The monkeys who swing and never tire, Screeched loudly in tongues, Whilst smoke, stole oxygen out of their lungs. A mighty midget the porcupine, Warned chancers that his quills so fine, Would incur great pain Not only a red blood stain, For he dreaded to be turned belly up, And had no intention, of being anyone’s sup! The birds began to fly very high, Away from the smoke, in the sky. The unfortunate tortoise lost his way, And sadly, with his life, had to pay. The giraffe with tall spindly legs Ran wildly destroying nests and eggs, His wildness came from his wrath, And, the chaos along his path. The animals ran faster away from the fire, Whilst the flames leapt higher and higher. A mamba slithered forward next, Whilst a frightened cub looked on perplexed, A Zebra, tripped and broke his back, Causing more confusion in this race track. The springbok and hyena together ran, They were now close to the water pan, The pan was next to a river, Would they make it, Each animal began to quiver, Could the springbok be tomorrow’s lunch, A tree falls with a thud and crunch, Distracting the hyena from his would be munch! The fox cunningly glances from side to side, Nimbly a burning log jumps wide. The lions mouth their cubs gently but tight, As they run from this horrendous plight. But water is in sight! Everyone is close to the finish line, This race has become competitively fine, The crocodiles are savagely waiting to dine! They have spotted their first meal, The frightened perplexed cub hurriedly steal. Only a quarter, Can get into the water. A stampede starts, animals clamber over each other, The young ones protected by their mother. Unfortunately only the strongest will survive, To tell future generations of their strive, Of what it’s like, living a bush veld life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/9/2018 5:09:00 PM
This is certainly California right now. Over a horizon me he did lead, Then all of his love would feed; Direction corrected; With Him connected; Was Son of God who we do need.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 3/29/2019 8:58:00 AM
Hi James, I'm so sorry only saw this comment now - yes wherever a fire rages we must look to God, but unfortunately some only look to Him in hours of need - a great comment - thank-you James. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 10/19/2018 7:13:00 AM
You take words right out of my mouth. I don't know what to say about your Poems anymore...These are some words that come to mind, Awesome, Fabulous, Excellent, Outstanding...You are just excelling in this. Another one going on my favourite list of your poems. Kim
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/23/2018 2:31:00 PM
Thank-you for your lovely compliments Kim. I so enjoy writing about being in the bush and the wild. Take Care! xoxo, Jennifer.
Date: 10/16/2018 2:32:00 PM
Amazing write Jennifer, really takes one into the dangers of places of extreme hear where fires can start in a moment. This has lovely rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Have a great day, Gordon
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/17/2018 1:49:00 PM
Hi Gordon, I love visiting our Kruger National Park, but it has happened on one of our trips that a huge fire had destroyed a massive amount of the bush, thank goodness the casualties amongst the animals were minimal. Thank you for your comment. God Bless. Jennifer.
Date: 10/15/2018 5:34:00 PM
G'day Jennifer … oh Jennifer, nearly every summer rage here in Australia, and because being in thick forest they can burn for weeks and many times towns are burnt out, lives, livestock, and fauna perish so in your fast moving poem I understand the fear and panic - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/16/2018 12:21:00 PM
Hi Lindsay, - Australia and South Africa have massive veld areas, and fires can take days to be put out. S.A's last disaster was when the Knysna forest area burnt and the destruction to people, animals and flora was unimaginable. The KNP is also always a danger. We go there often but try not to be around during the hot dry season! Happy you enjoyed, Kind regards, Jennifer
Date: 10/15/2018 3:49:00 PM
Wow! this is fast-paced, exciting, sad,vividly descriptive and true to life. Reminds me of many documentaries that I've seen. You merit a fave for overall effort. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/16/2018 11:53:00 AM
Hi Paul, I love my National Geographic documentaries and especially David Attenborough's nature programmes - so glad you enjoyed and thank-you for your fave merit of this poem Paul. Visiting the park after a veld fire shows how cruel and unrelenting a raging bush fire can be! Best regards, Jennifer
Date: 10/15/2018 3:07:00 PM
You have inked a picture of the mighty and unbiased destruction such fire bestows upon its innocent victims, be they animals or humans. Great read from start to fine finish.. A fav..
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/16/2018 12:03:00 PM
Thank-you Robert for your grasp and understanding of the destruction and chaos that a raging fire leaves in its aftermath! My intention was to portray this. Great that you enjoyed. Kind regards, Jennifer
Date: 10/13/2018 4:57:00 PM
Still think you should write and illustrate books for children - or films for Walt Disney as this was almost like a narration of Bambi escaping the fire …. Aloha! Rico
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/14/2018 3:02:00 AM
Hi Rico, Would love to but we have a small business with a lot of clients nation wide that we service. There are four of us only and each plays their particular role, so during the day I am a personnel consultant and by night a poet (the latter is my passion)! Walt Disney sounds good! Yasou, Jennifer.
Date: 10/13/2018 3:11:00 PM
I could visualize how frightened the animals are when fleeing from fire. Their fear in not unlike ours with a mother's instinct to protect their offspring. You have expressed this wonderfully in your poem. : )
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Date: 10/13/2018 3:55:00 PM
Absolutely Connie! I made a point of using the lion cub as an example because we have seen them in the park (from our car), they look adorable , and a pride of lions, is a very close family unit. It is horrible to imagine the cub separated from the mother in this confusion! xoxo Jennifer
Date: 10/13/2018 12:57:00 PM
An amazing look at all of the forest/jungle creatures who are displaced and seeking refuge when a wildfire ravages their habitats. The birds were the lucky ones -- they had but to fly away. Pity the others, especially when the stampede begins. Well done, Jennifer! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/13/2018 3:22:00 PM
Hi Carolyn, It is sad. I have a close connection to the wild and wildlife thanks to my husband who instilled this love for the wild in me. On one of our visits to the Kruger Park there had been a ravaging fire a week before and the smell of burning and smoke was still in the air. Our visit was in the height of summer and we relied solely on our air-con - imagine the animals? Thank-you so much for your comment Carolyn. xoxo Jennifer
Date: 10/13/2018 12:54:00 PM
Must be a terryfying experience for humans and animals alike. Well written Jennifer. Tom
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Date: 10/13/2018 3:50:00 PM
Hi Tom, Absolutely! Animals are vulnerable and run anywhere just terrified, but I agree, just it is as terrifying for humans caught in raging fires, something we have seen often in the news media of late. many thanks for your comment Tom. Kind regards, Jennifer.

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