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A Burning Love

This world in a state of confusion upside down in no mans land love eternal flame hopes candle blossoming red flames on fire with the rays a setting sun Burning deep hot pokers inside this heart power of another hangs one's destiny crossing the dead sea flickering shadows smoldering ashes in dreams staring into an empty space Opening the windows of my soul misted emotions fall loving someone beyond everything drowning in pain one gulp a time slipping away dealing with the heart's hurt this nightmare holds pain within Awaiting light of the morning sun dawning of life carrying dark shadows in ghosts of loved ones until we meet again love never leaves we get hurt within loves emotion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/1/2014 12:54:00 PM
I think I read this one on CS already. Forlorn but excellently crafted heart felt poem.
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Date: 12/31/2013 3:38:00 AM
Tenderly expressed my friend. You are genuinely cared about , just in case you ever wondered. Wishing you a very beautiful 2014 and that your poetry will bloom with deeper colors than you've ever known before . Hugs
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Date: 12/30/2013 5:55:00 PM
Painful thoughts captured by this poem. Well expressed.
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Date: 12/30/2013 5:26:00 PM
a strong and meaningful write Liam but mate the pain pours out have you been crossed again in love? great pen Shadow x smile hugsss
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