A Burning Desire

If I tell you my deepest secret and open up to you
Would you do all the things that I ask you to do?
If I ask you to kiss me in my secret place
Would you wrap your arms around my hips, with an erotic embrace?
If I tell you that I yearn to feel you deep within
If I open my doors and welcomed you in
Could you take me to a place of endless ecstasy?
Could you feed my hunger, and satisfy my cravings
If I tell you that I want you to explore the unknown
Could you take me to places that I’ve never gone?
Could you find rest within me, fill me with delight
Would you make sweet love to me, for the rest of the night?
If I tell you that I want to taste your sweetness
If I bow down to you and greet you with a kiss
 Could you journey with me, to heavenly bliss?
If I drink of your love, down to the last drop
If I caress you with my tongue, would you beg me to stop?
If I tell you that I have this burning desire
Would you smolder these flames, could you put out my fire ?

Chiquita Chiamaka Baity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/3/2012 4:36:00 PM
For various reasons I have been away from poetrysoup for months. I am totally amazed by for writings. How in is this world is it possible for someone to write so many powerful poems. Wow
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Date: 12/12/2011 11:10:00 AM
I am so short of words, quite romantic
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:31:00 PM
wow.... great question eloquently repeated with no redundancy at all! grats and beauty day. Namaste~N
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Date: 9/28/2011 3:49:00 AM
Congratulations, Chiquita, not only for this win, but for sharing this nice piece with all... this is perhaps one of the very few i like most from this entire bunch..sensuality by its very nature refuses to be all that subdued or soft..yours truly is worthy of being called sensual..
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Date: 9/27/2011 10:15:00 PM
I'm just going to post this on my front door come winter and I won't have to turn on my heat. Congrats on your win in Nette's contest. Vince
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:46:00 PM
Congrats Chiquita on a wonderful win with fantastic entry of great soft and sensuous words expressing contest theme luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 6:11:00 PM
deep,very deep.congrats babe on your win.
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:20:00 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality" contest, congratulations Chiquita. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Chiquita
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Date: 9/26/2011 5:18:00 AM
this is great..
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Date: 9/24/2011 4:25:00 PM
Wish you luck with this...great write...happy weekend!
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Date: 9/24/2011 7:55:00 AM
emmm...diz girl ton bad noni.....lovely...another great piece...so times i wonder where you get all this ideas from..anyway lets leave it like that...but beautiful us this piece....one of my favorite by you
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Date: 9/24/2011 12:22:00 AM
well, this one belongs in a contest named Smoldering! The title is very fitting, Chiquita. Very sensuous!
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Date: 9/23/2011 9:25:00 AM
Chiquita, once again you take me over the edge of imagination to a place I'd love to see and be with you! Another beautifully enticing, erotic piece of playfulness by your exquisite penmanship. Thanks for sharing and also your thoughts on "If I Could Reach across the Miles." Your too kind and I luv U for your thoughtfulness.
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:18:00 AM
Hmmm...this is HOT...Chiquita..very passionate write here...Pl.Change GREAT to GREET.....this will do good in the contest...
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