A Building Going Up

A building’s going up across
The river and I find
Though I’ve watched it be constructed,
Still, it really blows my mind.

Where once was just some empty space,
The crew and all their cranes
Have built a massive structure;
Now no empty space remains.

I don’t know how they do it
But it’s rising really fast,
The view forever altered,
For that building’s meant to last.

 It doesn’t block the river – 
Well, at least from where I sit,
Though the residents who live behind it
Might just have a fit

Since this brand-new edifice appears
To 99%
Cause all those unlucky souls to wonder
Where the river went.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 7:33 PM
'Sea change,' I'd say it. Not always 'a good look...'
Lane Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 1:02 PM
What a shame to block any river view but I’m glad you are still able to see it, Ilene.
Allison Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Sometimes its amazing how planning goes through for some of these buildings and the impact it can have on the surroundings and people. there is a derelict hotel here since 2007, its a real eyesore but still nothing has been done as planners battle with the builders! hugs jan xx hugs jan xx
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