A Brush With Death

The witches are flying tonight,
so funny to see 'em in flight:
all sat on a broom,
so really no room,
I guess they are holding on tight.

But now they are looping the loop,
the broomstick is starting to droop,
I watch as they fall -
the poor cat an' all -
despite all the spells, they're in poop...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 11/14/2023 5:59:00 AM
Nice on jack, congratulations
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Date: 11/13/2023 2:58:00 PM
lol Jack I'm sorry I missed this gem lol, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/13/2023 11:52:00 AM
I so appreciated the rhythmic roll to this poem and the fun content Jack.
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Date: 11/13/2023 10:22:00 AM
congrats on your deserving win, Jack.
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Date: 11/13/2023 3:25:00 AM
Haha, Very nicely done Jack Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/31/2023 10:50:00 AM
haha. Good one, jack.
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Date: 10/30/2023 3:43:00 PM
Enjoyed the rhyming and fluent flow of these lines, Jack. Halloween witches deserve better than poop lol:) Regards // paul
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Date: 10/29/2023 1:33:00 PM
This is too funny! Love the logic line of 'despite all the spells'.
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Date: 10/29/2023 8:45:00 AM
Almost makes one feel sorry for the witches for once. LOL..Thanks for sharing this creative and funny one. Sara K
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