A Brothers Forgiveness

On a journey down the mile
A priest knelt down in prayer
“Our father help me guide this lost soul
To your loving embrace 
That you may be his last judge 
His stain of death will mark him
So that you might welcome him
his return home imminent …….Amen”
The priest continued on his way
Heavy of heart .. 
his horror of what lay ahead marking his face
nearing the cell He pauses 
The hardest part lay before him
The warden appearing pulls him aside …
” Keep him calm with your gibberish father
We’ll do the rest “
Cold Grey walls surround him 
silver bars
The only splash of light or shine 
Prison a hellish place to live 
Let alone die
Blah blah blah the warden
rambling on his voice fading 
Nothing of the tragedy 
The Killing time to come
Oh the horror in the knowing
The hour of our death
Arriving at their destination
The warden steps back 
wanting no part of what was next
Metal bars swing back 
revealing a man of mammoth proportions
needle worn skin a moving picture of colour 
“Hello Brother “
The priest freezes in time
before him a brother lost
found Oh Lord only to loose him again
Desperation horror madness
All cross the priest’s face
“Why ?” says the priest
“Though we don’t share belief or lifestyle
I love you brother .. 
I ask your forgiveness for your compassion
My blood flows through your veins
Much as they say god flows through yours
I only ask for a brothers forgiveness
That i may meet my death
Having made my peace with my blood”
For a time silence 
Bile rising in the back of his throat
The priest fighting for composure
Steels himself .. 
“As a priest I forgive you 
As your brother I grieve for you”
Reaching for his brother 
Arms like logs wrap round the priest
Sobbing for what could have beens
The brothers sat like this till … 
Time was called
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 13, 2009 at 8:33 AM
A powerful piece of writing here. It makes me as a member of society take a look at justice from both perspectives. Congratulations on a well-deserved feature. God bless! - Milt
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September 10, 2009 at 7:37 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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September 8, 2009 at 6:14 PM
Jayne - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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September 8, 2009 at 2:10 PM
Jane, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 7, 2009 at 3:24 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Jayne, excellent reward for an excellent poem>>James
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September 7, 2009 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Jayne. Love, Carol
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May 21, 2009 at 7:39 AM
Very detailed telling with gripping lines that hold the reader to th end ... he begs for more ... time was called ... there will be other writes to read. You are indeed a genius, O may I call you friend?
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May 15, 2009 at 6:16 PM
Thank you so much ... I will certainly read more of your poetry love what I've read so far ... And i will certainly find your blog though I am still learning to navigate the site so if i dont find it soon someone send out a search party lol ... Love and Light God Bless Jayne "let me be a guiding light in your endless night of darkness when all others go out"
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May 15, 2009 at 4:56 PM
This piece is well composed. This is the type situation when we pray for the souls so that forgiveness will shine with mercy. Situations such as this is unfortunate. However, if you would also like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph
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