A Broken Person

In some new life of do or die
I pondered what to be
I thought about the reason why
Until it came to me

The promise of a dream come true
Was written in my heart
The freedom of an ocean blue
Was just a world apart

An empty canvass called to me
In paint-by-number thrills
My vision of eternity
Would hardly pay the bills

My calling was to navigate
The fog that boxed me in
To pick and choose my goodly fate
And calculate a win

If Father Zeus remembered me
In all my victories won
Then Mother Goose remanded me
Before the day was done

My self-esteem belittled more
Than battled for my dreams
The rainclouds of my nevermore
Were battering my schemes
 
I should've been content to live
My life as I saw fit
To settle down with those who give
A hoot before they quit

My aspiration followed me
To land my true vocation
But constipation hindered me
Before I left the station

I might’ve been the kindly youth
Who barely made the grade
Who followed blindly for the truth
Behind a loud parade

The vision of an older man
Is still the better choice
The promise of a bolder plan
Is waiting for my voice.
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Agustin Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 12:33 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Norton Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thank you for reading, Beata. Take care now, Bryan.
Radice Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 3:10 AM
Another excellent poem Bryan. Rhyme. Cadence. Skilled story telling. 3 big ticks. Congratulations. Cheers - Gary
Norton Avatar
July 26, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thanks, Gary. Always great to hear from you.
Alex Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 11:14 PM
A beautiful rhyme on a broken person. Rings in the ears. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 10:43 PM
Superb rhythm here 8-6-8-6, eloquently penned! Congrats on your win, Bryan
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Nicely done, Bryan, fantastic rhyme.
Norton Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Thank you very much, Eve. As you can tell, I do enjoy my rhyme. Best wishes, Bryan.
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 1:33 PM
I prefer the short poems, but you did really well with this, Bryan. I saw this challenge and thought to myself "how the heck can I ever approach this one?" Anyway, it might be one of the judges who never places me, and in that case, I will not try at all.
Seeker Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 10:46 PM
Ah! But we write for ourselves, dear Andrea, not for any judge :)
Norton Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Thank you, dear. Have a great day. Bryan
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