A Broken Man Set Free

I am a Broke Man, with a father in a home, but
Yet I feel fatherless in my on home. 
I'm A Broke Man, I have no father at all, because we lack a father In our lives we Struggle and Suffer in life.
I'm a Broke Man all I  ever want was Acceptance, Respect, and Appreciation from you father.
I'm a Broke Man that lack Security, because never made feel it father.
I'm A Broke Man all I ever wanted Approval from you Father.
I'm A Broke Man that was lacking Encouragement, you didn't give to me dad.
I'm that Broke Man that need Support, Comfort, and Affection from you Father.
I am an Angery Broke Man that really need you there in my life.

But, Now I am no longer a Broke Man for I have been set Free and I forgive you Dad.
I Am not a Broken Man, for I have made the Lord my shepherd. 
I  Am not A Broke Man for I vow to be a good husband to my wife and a father to my children.  I am that Village Dad to the fatherless, for I know not just boys needs father, but the girls need their fathers too. 
I am not a Broken Man for God has healed me and place good role models in my life.
Yes I am set free and I No longer label myself A Broke Man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/24/2015 8:23:00 AM
Kimberly, this is a very powerful poem. I admit, in a way I can relate to this poem. Except the free part. I've never gotten much approval during my life. Love, the healing feeling here. SKAT
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Kimberly Lowe-West
Date: 1/24/2015 9:15:00 PM
Who every was the Father figure in your life is still broken and it affects you. Time heal all hurt. Hopefully
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