A Broken Heart

A promise to be together is broken,
just not a promise but my soul
      which always loved you,
no matter how risky it was for me.
     I traded my heart in return for 
your love
           ended being betrayed and totally
broke,
wreck me completely but not my
     heart ,which is always for you
 and awaits you.
Living happily with someone
      in the castle ,built of our memories'
is a death bed to me.
Just for second ,could not you see
what you are to me
           Listen to my broken heart,
what its saying to you.
         Take a step back and turn back
around and see where I am,
           holding pieces of my heart
in  hands.
     You could not see tears in my ears and
now you are making me cry.
           How could you just walk away from my life,
from me crushing my soul.
        I will die for you every day ,
to see  you alive.
you were my valentine for a lifetime
   and  you are gone leaving me
in miserable pain.
Atleast tell me how to live without you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/20/2023 6:56:00 PM
Poignant, painful, piercing ~ so exquisitely penned, kenisha! No wonder it was a contest winner, as I see from the comments
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/22/2023 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and sharing your views. Its really a pleasure to read your poems. have a great day ! :)
Date: 6/16/2017 12:39:00 PM
Such a sad but beautiful poem, you truly have talent for expressing true love and your feelings, remember somebody told me that the past is dead but the future is bright look ahead and you ll definately find someone but it s trey that when someone so close to you leaves you or went away it felt like your purpose of living has ended, you don t wanted to do anything however I m new here and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 6/18/2017 10:35:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and supportive words.have a great day!
Date: 7/24/2015 3:15:00 PM
Kenisha, congratulations on your Broken Heart win. **SKAT**
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/25/2015 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much and have a great weekend:)
Date: 7/24/2015 1:11:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb winning write Kenisha!
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/24/2015 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much :) i didnot expect but really thank you for sharing the news.have a great weekend:)
Date: 8/19/2013 10:02:00 AM
Aww! Emotional piece.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/20/2013 9:06:00 AM
thank you so much and have a great day.
Date: 5/28/2013 9:28:00 AM
a lovely write, as i read each word here penned, tears roll in my heart's eyes,i understand the pain, i hope it is not true and just a poem for sure
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 5/29/2013 3:48:00 AM
thank you so much for reading and yes its just a poem.have a great day :)
Date: 4/3/2013 3:54:00 PM
so heart rending words,Congrats.....Seren
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/4/2013 2:59:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 4/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
you really showed us a broken heart with yours! Congrats for your win.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/2/2013 3:45:00 AM
thank you so much :).
Date: 4/1/2013 11:01:00 AM
Congrats...:-) Donna
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/2/2013 3:45:00 AM
thank you so much :)
Date: 3/31/2013 9:55:00 AM
Congrats, Kenisha. Excellent. Nice going. Happy Easter. Ralph
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 4/1/2013 3:04:00 AM
thank you so much and happy Easter have a great day :)
Date: 3/30/2013 11:13:00 PM
Kenisha, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 3/31/2013 3:09:00 AM
thank you so much .yes its really hard to deal with the broken love but we should never let go hope .
Date: 11/26/2012 2:22:00 PM
i ca really feel the pain in this poem..very well written and i hope that person described in the poem finds his/her love.
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 11/27/2012 7:00:00 AM
thank you so much
Date: 9/18/2012 4:56:00 AM
Vary emotional write. Sad. Well penned. Tfs
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/19/2012 3:51:00 AM
thank you so much.
Date: 9/4/2012 9:13:00 AM
The name of the pain is "the pain of absence of loved one", it inspires to live life one side and kills from the other side. It's mysterious. Wonderfully adorned. Loved always, bl
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 9/5/2012 12:52:00 AM
thank you so much dev.have a great day :)
Date: 8/30/2012 2:25:00 AM
painful but truly nice poem, well penned Kenisha! Hugs - Laila
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/31/2012 5:18:00 AM
thank you so much Laila.have a great weekend :)
Date: 8/22/2012 10:41:00 PM
A passionate rendering of a broken heart speaking. Such a sad song. Cynthia
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/23/2012 7:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading and posting a comment.:)
Date: 8/18/2012 8:26:00 AM
Quite an emotional poem..nearly make me cry...nicely penned down..with best wishes, Watisungla :)
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/19/2012 9:01:00 AM
thank you so much.have a great day :)
Date: 8/16/2012 5:10:00 AM
having had my heart broken recently ur poem resonates well deep with me...good stuff with emotional understanding
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/17/2012 8:56:00 AM
thank you .wish your broken heart heals soon.
Date: 8/6/2012 11:54:00 PM
you express your feeling in this nice poem..thanks for sharing :) have a nice day!!
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/7/2012 11:47:00 PM
thank you for reading .have a nice day :)
Date: 8/6/2012 9:49:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this poem full of feelings..thnx for stopping by..best to you:) Jag
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/6/2012 11:49:00 PM
thank you so much
Date: 8/2/2012 10:19:00 AM
Please check your soup mail.
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Date: 8/1/2012 11:59:00 PM
It's very moving and sweet,Kenisha.Thanks for congrats!
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/2/2012 12:45:00 AM
thank you so much for your words.
Date: 7/30/2012 11:59:00 PM
Excellent. Very touching and moving poem. Tfs
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 8/1/2012 3:58:00 AM
thank you so much for reading ,have a great day
Date: 7/27/2012 2:15:00 PM
True love of a broken heart penned nicely. Really happens to many. Thanks my friend for this sad write. Loved always, bl
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/29/2012 7:43:00 AM
thank you so much.have a great day
Date: 7/26/2012 5:50:00 AM
Excellent poem here of Heart break..."A heartfelt read"
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Kenisha Shines
Date: 7/26/2012 8:56:00 AM
thank you so much for reading and for the comment
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