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A BRILLIANT STAR

Her external beauty matches her internal one; I call her a brilliant star so unique, majestic and pretty. In her delicate, affectionate and womanly embrace: love is expressed immensely, as I feel loved with a praise... remembering her with that certain spark of sensuality. Other women have loved me honestly and sweetly, but not enough to create a lasting bond... to start a legacy perpetuated in memory as of those who can be recognized in any crowd. Humble woman of unsung virtues, I will adorn, at last... your strands of gray hair with beautiful diamonds: if neither honor nor glory will be given before your death: I will proclaim you a brilliant star...the envy of others!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/2/2012 9:59:00 PM
ANDREW..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/6/2012 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win.Beautiful poem.
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:48:00 AM
How sweet !! Congrats on the win in Brian's contest !!
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:47:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your outstanding write. Have a great day. Jon
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Date: 1/6/2012 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Any Top Twenty" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/15/2010 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in Linda-Marie's contest "One in a Million". Love, Carol
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Date: 11/14/2010 8:28:00 AM
I'm so pleased to see this poem in the winners' circle, Andrew. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/11/2010 11:10:00 AM
Congrats, Andy. Excellent entry. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 11/10/2010 11:26:00 PM
Andrew...congrats on well deserved win ......... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/10/2010 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Andrew
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Date: 11/10/2010 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrew on your success on this contest. Nice imagery and profound words. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/9/2010 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your success with your poem in the top ten winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 4:59:00 PM
My congratulations dear Andrew on you win in Linda's "One in a Million Contest! Lovely! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/9/2010 3:57:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your success in my One in a Million contest with this unique entry and lovely write... enjoy ..and thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors on Soup.. with luv..
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:07:00 PM
Anything and everything was written about this weekend. I am enjoying reading all the wonderful poetry written this past weekend and this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2010 5:58:00 AM
It matters only that she is a star in your eyes, Andrew. The fact that you can see beauty in her gray hair tells us you have loved her for a very long time. Such a beautiful love poem, my friend. Thanks for your comments and even more for your friendship. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 12:00:00 PM
This lilting work resounds with sweet passion,andrew... fascinating word usage. warmest, nette
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