A Brief Description of My Week

Passed this week by slow
like honey poured out
Monday over oats
and figs, milk, bowl
of mixed up fruit with.

Tuesday drinking
I two coffees
by day making
way for scheduled

busy time.
Busy week
came Friday

at last
catching

breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Witty write, you really are talented... that is the best hexaverse I have seen. Keep aweing me my friend.
Locksley Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 11:12 AM
You chose the perfect form to describe this hectic week, Chad. I can relate to this one, especially the last few lines about needing to catch your breath after working so hard. Great poem! Diane
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