A Bride As Beautiful As She

Love,
Magic,
That is what 
Is in the air.
Tonight, while the bride
Walks down the isle to her
Awaiting groom. Her lips twist
upwards into a smile so sweet.
How could he be so lucky, as to
get a bride as beautiful as she is.

Note:
The Etheree form consists of ten lines. The first line has one syllable, The second has two, 
and so on and so forth. The poem will in end will have fifty-five syllables.
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Cowan Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 12:27 AM
Thank you Robert, it's my first etheree that I have ever written :)
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:44 PM
A nice example of an etheree. It is well written and descriptive.
Cowan Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:01 PM
Thank ou both :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 10:33 PM
Very nicely done!! Congratulations, Sierra. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your win Sierra in Constance~A Rambling Poet's~ contest " Forms of Poetry 101". Love, Carol
Cowan Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Thank you! :)
Roberts Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 7:54 AM
congrats on your HM with this lovely etheree
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 9:21 PM
Congrats on the win, Sierra
Cowan Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 9:18 PM
Thank you! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Congrats Sierra on your HM in the Forms of Poetry 101 contest.. a new form and new poem to give u a special honor as a reward for your fine efforts ... enjoy sweet success.. with luv..
Cowan Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 5:34 PM
thank you Celene :) Glad you liked it!
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 1:46 PM
How beautiful your verse,as beautiful as she.
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