A Breath of Ecstacy

You never could 
tame my spirit
you ravished my mind
trailing lips of Neruda
peeling my clothes off
your teeth slowly
found your way 
and gripped the edge
of nirvana


slide my passion
to the floor
feel the air pulse
with fevered fingers


and as your 
inhibitions release
onto a plateau of being,


take one breath to Ecstasy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:23 AM
Great passionate write..Thanks for the answer about the birthday...Have a great day!...Sara
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