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A Break Up In Elvisville

On the JAIL HOUSE ROCK wall written in chalk I'm not a HOUND, DOGgone it, why did you walk? I saw her brother RETURN TO SENDER away I was BURNING LOVE letters the very next day! IN THE GHETTO, KENTUCKY RAIN is pouring down So it is VIVA LAS VEGAS when I leave town! I know IT'S NOW OR NEVER, so DON'T BE CRUEL Sure gambling's a DEVIL IN DISGUISE, I'm no fool with A LITTLE LESS CONVERSATION about it today and lots of money SUSPICIOUS MINDS will fade away you know I CAN'T HELP FALLING IN LOVE with you Your LITTLE SISTER said it's true, in her BLUE SUEDE SHOES ARE YOU LONESOME TONIGHT, you know that I'll be there You've got me ALL SHOOK UP, LET ME BE YOUR TEDDY BEAR!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/12/2018 2:51:00 PM
Classic Elvis all the way - also cool that you made it all rhyme!
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Date: 4/12/2018 4:07:00 PM
I'm a big fan of rhyme all of the time. Hey, that......uh well any way, thanks for commenting Michelle......ELVIS................has left the building!!!...me too....80)
Date: 8/30/2017 9:06:00 AM
Very clever!
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Date: 8/30/2017 3:32:00 PM
Thank you....Thank you very much!!...pat
Date: 8/30/2017 2:55:00 AM
Great use of the Elvis song titles, really enjoyed your clever story Pat|:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/30/2017 3:31:00 PM
Thank you....Thank you very much!!..pat

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