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A Brave New World

A Brave New World I am standing here looking back; the jewel that shines is the Earth I know God promised a new world one day for those that are of worth I wonder how I managed to be worthy of such a prize My life has not been perfect, I have even told some lies. I always tried to do good, I never tried to cheat And now I am standing looking back thinking - this really is neat Looking around; am I alone; where are all the meek? I know I can’t be the only one saved, but perhaps this is my week. I turned the other cheek before, but I have sworn with the best I have flirted with many a man but never done the rest Will this new earth be all that’s promised in the Holy Book? I know I know the scripture but perhaps another look. I have realised from reading the scripture a new He isn’t going to make another planet, just the old one he will renew The bad will be gone the meek inherit the earth I wonder how I got here, is it like a new rebirth? I check the words I am reading and God says this prize could be mine I don’t have to be perfect just keep trying all the time My brave new world I am looking on; the jewel in the sky Is my hope of a good life on earth and I don’t want it to pass me by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/2/2012 6:26:00 AM
first time here, again, your philosophy is outstanding...
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 11/2/2012 6:56:00 AM
Thanks xx
Date: 5/10/2012 11:50:00 PM
With the title, I was first expecting to read a poem dedicated to the 1932 novel with the same title written by the late Aldous Huxley. I see that is not the case. Nevertheless, it has great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:30:00 AM
Thanks carol, get well soon xx
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:19:00 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Mandy. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:14:00 PM
very nice write Mandy..thanks for your comments on my poem ,,love..Joseph
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Date: 5/7/2012 6:14:00 PM
Hello, Mandy, a great poem to experience.. I'm glad all scripts are seen through the most clearness matter... we can still discover something to make this world sweeter... good luck in the contest..always..pd
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Date: 5/7/2012 5:35:00 PM
Nice piece, mandy, thnx for sharing, jag
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