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What Don said to Joseph was true though the brainwashed won't see that view they will keep the old man as long as they can then send in a brand new screw.

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Date: 7/1/2024 7:15:00 AM
Nice poem and to the point. Aging is difficult, but is even harder when the person is pushed beyond his limits. Compassion will be a two fold blessing.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/6/2024 8:17:00 AM
Thank you. Yes, aging is difficult. I'm 66 years old and caring for my 89 year old mother. Happily, she is still alert to what is going on in the world.
Date: 7/1/2024 3:52:00 AM
I think the old fella is screwed! Joe was a screw-up long before the debate. Nice job!
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Date: 7/1/2024 11:37:00 AM
Thank you.

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