Notes About The Poem

A Brain Fog

This poor brain
            That thinks for me
      Is all spent at the moment
                Malfunctioning
         Farting embarrassingly
               Creaky; it needs...
          A few drops of grease
        Do check back tomorrow
 For it is too tired to engage today
         Sorry, it has gone to bed
                         Early
             Let it sleep, please



Brainy Brevity Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy (Winner: 8th Place)
Date written and posted: 01/01/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Congratulations on your win with this witty piece Edward! : )
Ibeh Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 10:32 AM
Thank you very much, Connie!:-)
Staton Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Very nice!
Ibeh Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 1:13 PM
Thank you, Valerie!:-)
Gauthier Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Love it, Edward. Superbly done. Congrats on your win.
Ibeh Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 11:03 PM
Thank you very much, Line!:-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 12:15 PM
I enjoyed this SO MUCH! Thank you! Congratulations for your win in my contest Edward. xomo
Ibeh Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Maureen!:-) Most appreciated.
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