A Boy's Perfect Body

Before I had a boy's perfect body,
the sharpest mind and a spirit full of energy;
even strangers complimented me
on my selflessness, asking God to bless me! 


Had I known then that youth wasn't eternal, unlikely the indelible seasons
that renew themselves accordingly, I would have had
a different view of how it should have been lived...
with a more purposeful insight, which allowed no time for regrets! 


And that boy's perfect body, carved by loveliness , 
could be seen in photographs belonging to another century;
thick hair and a smooth face defined a neat appearance...
to make plenty of girls stare at me desirously! 


O young years, why didn't you warn me of your hastiness?
I could have made the effort to slow you down,
and enjoyed you more without ever wasting time in idleness!
Beautiful and care-free days, how can I posses youth again?


I am still kind of handsome, much older now,
and ladies adore my good looks, once flashing a sweet image   
in those attractive and radiant smiles of long time ago,
not worried about any wrinkle revealing their true age! 
  
 
Before I had a boy's perfect body...
magnificently sculptured like Michelangelo's David;
my adolescence began with my physical beauty,
and ended with that ravishing vanity tossed aside!    


Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/2/2009 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2009 1:14:00 PM
The truthfulness of getting older! Very nice. Congratulations on you honorable mention in Michael's contest!
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Date: 7/31/2009 12:46:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Michael's contest Andrew.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/30/2009 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest! ~*~ Trudy~*~
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