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A Boy Like Me?

In spite of it all.... Traveling over the Brooklyn Bridge, lights aglow What a magnificent sight Crossing the waters unto the city Upon the dawning of the night.... On his way to New York, a kid from California Doing the circuit about the East Coast Still in awe of it all; newness, has yet to fall From a very big world, in part, he has come to see New York City~The Empire~The Towers~Times Square Forty Second and Broadway~The Statue, of "Liberty".... Dwarfed by the rises, and lost among the, the crowds The only eyes that know him, smiling, and looking down I did it all for you ~ Eyes wide, bright lights, colorful sights, skies Thinking, where is Sachs Fifth Avenue? Broadway, straight ahead.... The collar of his trench coat turned upward, to cover the chill From about his neck; this kid from California Three thousand miles away from home Smiling at everyone, as he passes them by Exchanging good evenings, good days, and Glimpses into their precious eyes.... Faces he'll someday remember, perhaps? As he looks back, upon a moment A day, a night, a time, in New York City, amid an East Coast journey For a kid from California, once, upon a life ~ Grab a bite....I think I'll buy that watch Deeper into the subway....The hands upon the towers clock "Got a light?"~"Sorry, but I don't smoke" So, that's how they sound? Their voices, with that certain, prominence "No thanks, I'm fine," don't think, today I need, to get high!.... Staring down and all around, in awe of it all, once again All the lights, all the sights, far above...."Above" I did it all for you ~ Bright eyes, smiling eyes, smiling faces Beautiful faces, everywhere, he turned...."Stars" With stories endless, like glitter, poured The pages of their lives~The story, of "His" mankind.... To a kid from California, with innocence, still, in his eyes ~ Upon the steets of New York City; doing an East Coast circuit Long ago? Not really~But, once, upon a "Life" "I did it all, for "You!" ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A Boy Like Me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/23/2010 6:43:00 PM
Seeing The Big Apple for the first time you find it amazing.....at 21 when my Papa finally agreed that I could go, I went and stayed for 7 years!! I saw God's wonders even then..(long story to tell another time). You tell your experience so well, it transports the reader to those wide, busy streets always teeming with men and angels.. Love, and peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful write. I'm so glad I found it. I grew up in New Jersey, about 15 mins. from NYC. I use to love going there. So much to see and do. I have never been to California. From what I have seen and heard it is filled with many interesting and beautiful things. Maybe someday! I hope you are well. GBY, dear John! (Psalms 119:145-152) Love, Robin
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Date: 11/26/2008 4:53:00 PM
Hi John, I love this poem! I could so clearly envision it in my mind, it reminded me of myself "once upon a life", at the age of 19, small town me hopping a Greyhound to California to begin my new life. You really brought the excitement of that point of my life back into focus, "good writing" seems woefully inadequate for me to describe this. It was magical, thank you for sharing. And also thanks for the very sweet remarks on my poetry, I'm glad you enjoyed reading them. God bless friend, Amy :)
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:26:00 PM
Yep, NYC is made up of Boys like You. Ive only been there once but I loved every minute of it..was half scared out of my mind most of the time. Thaks for a walk down memory lane. BG
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Date: 11/19/2008 3:47:00 AM
This reminds me of my first time in NYC going over the bridge, a little Canadian girl of 22, being trapped in traffic on the bridge, watching ti all, really seeing it, it was a sight to behold for all time, love NYC!!!! I am lucky, we get to go there all the time now. :) Love this side of your work, love K
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Date: 11/18/2008 6:18:00 PM
Wow, John, this is a different side to our John! A glimpse of the younger you, out in the world. As a California girl, (small town at that), I remember with awe and a little fright, of my first time in New York City, riding the subway, and clutching my purse afraid it was going to be snatched away! It's a whole world apart from California...amazing and overwhelming! I enjoyed the account of your experience! :) Nicely done. ~ Carrie
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