I Am Anaya Poet Rhyme

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^{Bottle Garden Poetry Contest}

^{Sponsored by Julia Ward}

^{Third Place Win}

A Bottled Garden

A bell-jar, crystalline, as transparent as an aquarium
Vibrant colors burnt umbers tints glass atop the kitchen table.
No elaborate gardening, just gentle misting in the terrarium
Muted pinks, earthy tones, texture soft as Siberian sable
My supercilious ways are overridden by fecund elegance. 
Gather around my friends and behold cherished succulents.                                                                             
These flowery cacti, such profuse perennial poetic ebullience,  
with an award worthy, floral southwestern desert essence.

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Speaks Volumes July 29, 2023 at 12:51 PM I knew it would do well Congrats ! A well deserved win.

Mystic Rose Rose July 29, 2023 at 9:02 AM This is perfection in itself, never mind beauty, loved it, congrats on your 3rd place win, :) I Am Anaya July 29, 2023 at 9:38 AM Mystic Rose, the challenge here were to use unusual adj.'s the rest was just describing what is already obvious. Thank you for your kind words and congrats! xhugs

Christuraj Alex July 29, 2023 at 8:17 AM God!What a great work! Congratulations! I Am Anaya July 29, 2023 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Christuraj!

Julia Ward July 29, 2023 at 7:18 AM I love bottle gardens so your poem worked for me. Well done for its placement in my "Bottle Garden" contest. I Am Anaya July 29, 2023 at 9:36 AM Aren't they just beautiful, Julia I am delighted to make the list and for my placement in your challenging contest, Thank you!

Panagiota Romios July 16, 2023 at 1:21 PM Love your writing, Ayana! Wish I had one of these, Happy Sunday to you as well Panagiota 7/16/2023 I Am Anaya July 16, 2023 at 3:58 PM Pangie, hey a happy Sunday it is! In San Diego, they were hanging all around the floral boutique, mon cheri. The clerk had me at...They just need a mist once a week! Lol! ;D

Bill Baker July 14, 2023 at 5:24 PM Beautiful poem and image, Anaya. This will make you laugh ... I thought a bottle garden was a plot of land with different colored bottles with their necks sticking out. LOL What was I thinking? Thanks for sharing your poetry with us my friend. Bill I Am Anaya July 14, 2023 at 7:08 PM They are actually really cool. Blue bottles, wine bottles, hey Jack Daniel bottles make beautiful flower gardens! Recycle! Thank you, Bill :)

Regina Mcintosh July 14, 2023 at 2:17 AM Lovely write. God bless you, Love, Gina I Am Anaya July 14, 2023 at 7:10 PM Thank you, Gina! I really enjoyed your Bottled Garden entry. I am honored, God bless & love to you ~Anaya

Daisy Meadows July 13, 2023 at 11:29 PM A lovely description and poem. Well written. I Am Anaya July 14, 2023 at 7:10 PM Thank you, Jeanette!

Speaks Volumes July 13, 2023 at 10:40 PM Your exquisite Xerophile displays a stupendous air, as it proudly takes price of place in your scintillating terrarium, in its fidelity and exacting array. ..................... and................. I like it. :) ..............BOL I Am Anaya July 14, 2023 at 7:15 PM Lol, I learned another word! Thank you, S.V. for the smile and liking the way I expressed colorful cacti florae in a bottle.

Eve Roper July 13, 2023 at 8:55 PM Nicely described, Anaya, enjoyed reading. If for contest good luck my dear. I Am Anaya July 13, 2023 at 8:59 PM Thanks Eve, the contest asks to use at least one rarely used adjective. That's why I employed three seldom used adj. Let's see if I hit the mark! :)