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A Bottle of Red

Slipping down inside a crystal chandelier red rouge cheeks running on through breathe as visions settle in my mind you're just a little bit of nutty with an apricot perfume quite exceptional I do say a kindred spirit bouquet Teasing along the tip of my palate caramel gaze of grandeur glows as you kiss my parched lips away partaking a perfect compliment in every simple way sparkles spill in anticipation topping off a pleasant kind of day lordy

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/30/2017 11:10:00 AM

Good Afternoon Tim. You bet lordy (lol). And yes, the red of it all. Allow me to say may the red always be with you and one and all. Where would we be without it. I very much enjoyed reading this entry. Have a wonderful afternoon. Well done

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/29/2017 6:20:00 AM

Timmy, You never cease to impress--pass the bottle ,it's 7 up............lol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/28/2017 2:29:00 PM

toast to you for this fine work, tim... drink and be merry..huggs

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 4/28/2017 10:55:00 AM

Remarkably put. Thank you for sharing this tasty pleasure with us Tim. Red wine, in moderation, has such heart-healthy benefits:) Amitiés

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/27/2017 9:17:00 PM

Hi Tim, This poem was a tasty treat. Oh Lordy! A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis

Sara Ella

Date: 4/27/2017 8:45:00 PM

Yummy red wine - Lordy! Your poem makes me thirsty <3

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/27/2017 6:05:00 PM

Good imagery and flow are both presented within these lines. This poem was a pleasure to read and review. Like a good wine it holds a smile and releases it in the reading. Emile.

Darren White

Date: 4/27/2017 2:42:00 PM

"you're just a little bit of nutty" I love that :) Oh lordy! What a tasty poem this is!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/27/2017 2:08:00 PM

Oh lordy reminds me Im soon to be forty :)..Sorry...but had to rhyme with your bottle of wine...I do believe this nutty in your poem is quite a hussy from the way you speak of her..Sorry Im in a good mood :).Such a wonderful poem Timothu..Deserving a fave and a 7..

Joseph May

Date: 4/27/2017 12:32:00 PM

A savory delight!..Nicely penned

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/27/2017 12:21:00 PM

Tee hee hee, lovely write... I too love the red ;)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/27/2017 12:21:00 PM

lordy says it all Tim - save some for me!:-) hugs Jan xx