Home » Poems » David Fisher » A Bottle Half Full

A Bottle Half Full

A lonely lady who was despairing Was in need of some urgent repairing So since she was alone Plus no man on the phone A bottle of wine made a good pairing

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Jim Slaughter

Date: 6/30/2023 10:57:00 AM

Sometimes a good Pinot Grigio or a decent Chardonnay is more reliable, anyway. I agree with Panagiota, a little, but a very good limerick, otherwise, David.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/29/2023 7:43:00 PM

I see pathos in this David. Please excuse me. Loneliness occurs in both sexes, in the old and the young, The worst part is that people have no clue thsthat alxovol is drug,, is a depressant od all things, but I know we live in a culture more than willing to get high and escape pain. I-think your limerick reflects more than we know. Pangie

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2023 4:41:00 PM

not the best solution to a problem ,, but I'll drink to her success lol:-) fab limerick David xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/29/2023 4:38:00 PM

Sad situation. Good play on words or terms though. Thanks for sharing. Sara