A Bond Beyond Compare

Breathless and bare you subtly stare,
reckless with flair, I can barely stand-
You flutter your fingers through my hair, 
as I gently take your masculine hand. 
Only the Lord above can understand,
WE SHARE A BOND BEYOND COMPARE.

Quietly quaint, I feel I should faint, 
alone no more beyond the closed door-
I’ll sit as my silhouette you’ll paint,
this is what this life is good for.
It’s always been you that I adore,
when I’m with you I have no complaint. 

Unspoken, broken and utterly shattered, 
scarred beyond measure was I-
It’s always been you that mattered,
before you I was a lost butterfly.
Now I sing in choirs with angels on high-
you came to me, my heart pitter-pattered. 

So tender and kind, I'm outta my mind,
for you bring ease to my stress-
We are beauty and passion combined,
you make my soul shine, I must confess.
Before you I was a drifting mess, 
now we are one, our stars have aligned. 

        ~I never knew of a love so rare...
                           WE SHARE A BOND BEYOND COMPARE.~ 




December 4, 2017
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 6:08 PM
Rhymes are outstanding. Keep on keeping on, bbn
Haight Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:22 PM
Such a great poem, Laura Loo! Congratulations on your podium placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Congrats on your win Laura. Well done.
Barden Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 12:17 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Luloo - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
Hamilton Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:59 AM
Great rhymes Laura, sorry I missed this one on my comments, congrats on a great win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:10 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your fine win with such a wonderfully flowing poem.
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:40 AM
many thanks sweet Subimal ;) -luloo
Ashley Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 8:55 PM
A beautiful expression of emotions through vivid imagery and fantastic rhythm and rhyme, Laura. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:40 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Williams Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:45 PM
Laura, I really like this - beautiful words, imagery, and feelings. Congratulations on your strong placement! I hope 2018 is off to a good start for you and yours. All my best. :) Bartholomew
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 8:40 AM
thank you, you too! :)-luloo
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