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A Bond Beyond Compare

Breathless and bare you subtly stare, reckless with flair, I can barely stand- You flutter your fingers through my hair, as I gently take your masculine hand. Only the Lord above can understand, WE SHARE A BOND BEYOND COMPARE. Quietly quaint, I feel I should faint, alone no more beyond the closed door- I’ll sit as my silhouette you’ll paint, this is what this life is good for. It’s always been you that I adore, when I’m with you I have no complaint. Unspoken, broken and utterly shattered, scarred beyond measure was I- It’s always been you that mattered, before you I was a lost butterfly. Now I sing in choirs with angels on high- you came to me, my heart pitter-pattered. So tender and kind, I'm outta my mind, for you bring ease to my stress- We are beauty and passion combined, you make my soul shine, I must confess. Before you I was a drifting mess, now we are one, our stars have aligned. ~I never knew of a love so rare... WE SHARE A BOND BEYOND COMPARE.~ December 4, 2017

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Date: 1/27/2018 6:08:00 PM
Rhymes are outstanding. Keep on keeping on, bbn
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Date: 1/5/2018 4:22:00 PM
Such a great poem, Laura Loo! Congratulations on your podium placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/5/2018 2:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win Laura. Well done.
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Luloo - blessings and best wishes for a Happy New Year, friend! :-)
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Date: 1/4/2018 8:59:00 AM
Great rhymes Laura, sorry I missed this one on my comments, congrats on a great win!
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Date: 1/4/2018 12:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your fine win with such a wonderfully flowing poem.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/4/2018 8:40:00 AM
many thanks sweet Subimal ;) -luloo
Date: 1/3/2018 8:55:00 PM
A beautiful expression of emotions through vivid imagery and fantastic rhythm and rhyme, Laura. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/4/2018 8:40:00 AM
thank you lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 1/3/2018 12:45:00 PM
Laura, I really like this - beautiful words, imagery, and feelings. Congratulations on your strong placement! I hope 2018 is off to a good start for you and yours. All my best. :) Bartholomew
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/4/2018 8:40:00 AM
thank you, you too! :)-luloo

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