A Bold Master

say's my heart, let me fly 
chains and bonds, of world and lie
say's the hollow , follow me up
pains in my eyes, just don't let me sob...

My path is alone, just let me follow
weight of my dreams, doesn't chase me slow
sky so wide , braces me tight
say's its silence, yes, you are ELITE....

Throne of the ocean, awaits me ,dry;
prince of pain being born to CRY
says my light ,blow me off
hands of my hope ,still in cuffs

Voice deep within,shouting so loud!
supreme of love;this is what all its about.
Path of your dreams ,upon which you fall.
REMEMBER, fruit of your failure is the sweetest of all...........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Pokhrel Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Oh ...thank you...
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May 19, 2013 at 1:52 PM
Hi Jaanam, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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May 1, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Jaanam, :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
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May 1, 2013 at 8:01 AM
thank you ..Rick and Mandy....it was my first contest ever ..a bit out of theme given....
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May 1, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Many congratulations Jaanam xx
Pokhrel Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 11:45 PM
Thank you Linda for your precious comment..yes, i will be posting my poems. After posting which,i will be looking for more inspiration here in poetry soup. you seem popular here, and know a lot of poets .I would be glad ,if you joined me with the poets who write on my type of theme..
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April 28, 2013 at 10:27 PM
I like the epic imagery. I also love the way you refer to fruit of your failure is the sweetest of all.. Jaanam "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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April 28, 2013 at 2:52 AM
hloo
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