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A Bold Master

say's my heart, let me fly chains and bonds, of world and lie say's the hollow , follow me up pains in my eyes, just don't let me sob... My path is alone, just let me follow weight of my dreams, doesn't chase me slow sky so wide , braces me tight say's its silence, yes, you are ELITE.... Throne of the ocean, awaits me ,dry; prince of pain being born to CRY says my light ,blow me off hands of my hope ,still in cuffs Voice deep within,shouting so loud! supreme of love;this is what all its about. Path of your dreams ,upon which you fall. REMEMBER, fruit of your failure is the sweetest of all...........

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Date: 5/20/2013 9:10:00 AM
Oh ...thank you...
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Date: 5/19/2013 1:52:00 PM
Hi Jaanam, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:50:00 PM
Jaanam, :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 8:01:00 AM
thank you ..Rick and Mandy....it was my first contest ever ..a bit out of theme given....
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:02:00 AM
Many congratulations Jaanam xx
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Date: 4/28/2013 11:45:00 PM
Thank you Linda for your precious comment..yes, i will be posting my poems. After posting which,i will be looking for more inspiration here in poetry soup. you seem popular here, and know a lot of poets .I would be glad ,if you joined me with the poets who write on my type of theme..
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Date: 4/28/2013 10:27:00 PM
I like the epic imagery. I also love the way you refer to fruit of your failure is the sweetest of all.. Jaanam "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/28/2013 2:52:00 AM
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