A Body of Words

If our words were carved into our skin,
Like a legacy on a tombstone.
Do you think that people would embrace these words?
Or do you think that they’d try to hone
Their personality.
Attempt to make it better.
Or do you think that they would bury it in a sweater?
Maybe the sweater’s off the shoulder
Where there’s words of hope and care
And maybe, where there’s other kind words
There’s a hole in the sweater there,
Is it fair?
To only show the words that you want 
To pick and choose what people see
Even if you can’t change the font.
Do you think that people 
Would actually change what they say
When there is an easier way,
You may see good words written on their skin
But you don’t see what’s beneath the jumper
You don’t see what’s within
You may say that’s nice, but this is just a poem 
This doesn’t happen to us
But you’d be mistaken
Because,
A camera’s just the same
You don’t get to see what’s outside the frame.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/3/2019 10:06:00 PM
absolutely written -A camera’s just the same /You don’t get to see what’s outside the frame.
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Date: 2/3/2019 10:23:00 AM
Excellent piece, Anna; perceptive and challenging!
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Date: 2/3/2019 8:12:00 AM
Right to the top of my list, and in the FAV section. This is just brilliant. I like how its outside the box but not too far outside to where it can be misinterpreted. Bravo Anna!
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Date: 1/29/2019 4:32:00 AM
This poem had me smiling from beginning to end. I was especially fond of this part: "You may see good words written on their skin But you don’t see what’s beneath the jumper You don’t see what’s within." Bravo, Anna.
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Date: 1/28/2019 11:48:00 AM
Very cool. I love the closing, it was perfect. Welcome to Soup. I hope you have fun here.
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