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Pieter Both mountain peak in Mauritius

Written 22 April 2025 

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A Boastful Mountain

"Arrogance, a harmful disease,
                                 Never keeps human souls at ease
                                 And afflicts men with a false sense
                                        Of superior intelligence."- By author 
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                                          A Boastful Mountain

                                                 If antiquity       
                                         is the stamp of nobility,
                                       then I am nobler than man.
                               I stand here since the dark days of time
                             I have eyed the birth and death of species
                    the growth of the human race amidst divine mysteries
                the rise and fall of empires, the dreadful demise of dictators,
             emperors just like their vassals kissing the dusty earthen ground

		I have                                                        I have 
       viewed with dismay                                        silently stared
     deadly wars along my slopes                         in stark solitude at rank  
   men spearing each other with rage                and wealth being cast aside 
 bombing beautiful buildings and setup           fame and glory kissing the dust
 shooting children, civilians and capital cities   pomp, pride and abusive power 
                                                                reduced to grey ashes in an hour
                                                          stately mansions silently left to decay                                                    
                       I dread                      beauties fading away like spring flowers                                                 
                  not the sands               innocence being trampled on the highway                    
              of time moving in its                   
             relentless sway or the              
          fair winged chariot soaring
        up high in the clean cerulean sky                 
     as I am steady, stable and salutary
  while man fades away after a short while
and is a transitory traveler of the earthly plane.
                     
                        
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Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 1:41 PM
this is really cool. What were the symbols at the very bottom representing? I don't see the mountain as being boastful. It's just telling how things are in this messed up world. Great writing though.
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 4:19 PM
Ok I see your point!
Guptar Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 2:40 PM
The mountain has witnessed the decay of men, emperors, empires, man fighting , slaying each other and being just temporary travellers, while defying time, the mountain claims it stands steady, stable and is salutary. Is it not boasting in some way? May the blessings of light ever rest with you.
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April 24, 2025 at 2:38 PM
Thank you poet, dear poetess for appreciating the above poem. The main thrust of the poem is on comparing the quasi-permanence of a mountain with the transient, temporary nature of man....
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