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A Blushed Rise

i hear the whisper of your voice carried on the quiver of hummingbird wings alluring me into dreams like a lyric adrift on westerly breezes it lulls me to sleep on a sliver of moon within its lambent light shimmering timidly we dance ethereally like shadows entwined through the edges of darkness i can almost feel your lips tenderly pressing against mine as i curl myself in the depths of your arms a kiss of crimson against the horizon awakens me yet i am more blushed than morning in memories of my dreams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/11/2020 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the contest. This beautiful piece definitely deserves to be there at the top. I am so proud of you
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/11/2020 11:05:00 AM
thank you so much Chris... :) hugs
Date: 2/10/2020 10:45:00 PM
Such a delicate portrait of a whispy dream! Really lovely. Congratulations my friend. hugs to you!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/11/2020 11:05:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sam :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 9:37:00 AM
This puts me in mind of an old song from the fifties that went "I Keep A Dream Lover So I don't have To Dream Alone." Nicely done and well expressed. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 10:11:00 AM
Thank you Judy for you lovely comment and visit this morning :)
Date: 10/2/2019 8:17:00 AM
Beautifully expressed Sandy, such a softness, gentleness in the flow of words!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much John, it was a quick penned inspiration as i enjoyed the warmth of yesterday...another warm one today and then back to fall weather... hugs :)
Date: 10/2/2019 7:05:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 10/2/2019 6:55:00 AM
Wow, this was absolutely beautiful. That ending is the stuff that dreams are made of. I adore every thing about this soft and alluring piece. What a way to start the day.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:51:00 AM
Thank you for your sweet words my friend, they made me smile...as i basked in the warmth of yesterday my muse stirred...glad you liked this one :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 6:54:00 AM
Sweet.. romantic..lovely as ever, Sandy..superb ending stanza.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:52:00 AM
Thank you Vijay...the ending is often the hardest part of the write for me... :) hugs
Date: 10/2/2019 6:22:00 AM
Ooooh!...very well expressed my friend...time to take a shower lol...^WW^ :o)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:52:00 AM
lol...Thank you ww... :)
Date: 10/1/2019 11:06:00 PM
Sandra, Love this intriguing madrigal tune you've left in my head. -Richard
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:53:00 AM
Well thank you Richard :)
Date: 10/1/2019 10:44:00 PM
Dream blushes … wow !! Like shadows entwined through the edge of darkness... good image.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thank you Debra :) hugs
Date: 10/1/2019 9:51:00 PM
Ah, lovely, Sandra ~ ethereal, indeed. Too easy to get caught up in... a fave, my friend <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:54:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend...i am honored that you liked this one enough to fave it :) hugs
Date: 10/1/2019 9:24:00 PM
Tender, touching, and intimate. Two thumbs way up! Love the last image... Cheers, Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/2/2019 8:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend...see sometimes my muse comes out of the dark... :) hugs

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