Lord R. E. Taylor Poet Etheree

A Blue Bird Watching the Sad People

Sky
Deep blue
Blue birds fly
Through endless light
Watching the people
Rushing around their lives
Never noticing beauty
Only seeing unhappy lives
They should look they should see what they miss
See the beauty of the world before them

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Robin L. Gass December 30, 2008 at 7:55 PM This is a wonderful etheree. The imagery is vivid. The sentiment is truth. We do miss a lot, for all our worries. Excellent write! Thank you for your kind words and for sharing your work. Happy New Year! Love, Robin

Christopher Higgins December 16, 2008 at 6:27 AM This is a beautiful write. Love the form and the flow of the poem. You captured the sky, and the unhappiness very well.