A Blouse That Wows

She saw her in a smart sporty blouse 
That drew sharp eyebrows and parents' grouse. 
She spoke of her high stake: 
It's all for students' sake, 
Stay assured; I strive, young minds to rouse.
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This limerick portrays what actually happened in a primary school. She thought, her blouse inspires young minds to rouse; but parents found, it was too small a house her assets to house. So, the parents when complained, this, a limerick, was what she said in defence.
   
Happenings | 07.12.09 |
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 11:42 PM
love it Aniruddha, it works the other way too i have seen 6th formers wearing blouses so tight and skirts so short its unfair on the male students and staff!:-) hugs jan xx
Pathak Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 9:58 PM
I agree Jan Allison, as is truth multi-dimensional, so is humour. There are as many windows of views as are viewers' perspectives. As to the later part of what you said, yes I too remember my school days. Boys wear a lot on their sleeves. Libido is only one more, and is short fused.
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