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A Blouse That Wows

She saw her in a smart sporty blouse That drew sharp eyebrows and parents' grouse. She spoke of her high stake: It's all for students' sake, Stay assured; I strive, young minds to rouse. ______________________________________ This limerick portrays what actually happened in a primary school. She thought, her blouse inspires young minds to rouse; but parents found, it was too small a house her assets to house. So, the parents when complained, this, a limerick, was what she said in defence. Happenings | 07.12.09 |

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/11/2021 11:42:00 PM

love it Aniruddha, it works the other way too i have seen 6th formers wearing blouses so tight and skirts so short its unfair on the male students and staff!:-) hugs jan xx

Aniruddha Pathak
Date: 7/12/2021 9:58:00 PM

I agree Jan Allison, as is truth multi-dimensional, so is humour. There are as many windows of views as are viewers' perspectives. As to the later part of what you said, yes I too remember my school days. Boys wear a lot on their sleeves. Libido is only one more, and is short fused.