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A Bloody Good Deal

How could a corpse like me ask for more
Than this faucet from the showroom floor
It may look a dud
But it cleans off blood
And came dirt cheap from the Zombie Store

Copyright © David Fisher | Year Posted 2024

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November 27, 2024 at 2:30 PM

David, Very imaginative limerick with a spark of humor. Funny! - Gail

Paula Goldsmith

November 26, 2024 at 9:30 AM

A fun Limerick write. So you are shopping at a Zombie Store??? Hahaha!!! Enjoy your day..................

November 21, 2024 at 10:52 PM

Dark and forboding, who doesn't like a bargain lol. Tom

November 24, 2024 at 11:10 AM

Too true, while living or in the afterlife. Thanks so much for commenting!

November 21, 2024 at 8:46 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha - Can't ask for more. Why would you?! lol. Thanks for the guffaws, David.

November 24, 2024 at 11:08 AM

Thanks for the kind words, Gershon!

Hilda Greenhough

November 21, 2024 at 5:06 PM

I like this limerick. It sounds worthy of Poe.

November 24, 2024 at 11:07 AM

Thanks for that; it went to a picture in a limerick contest.

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