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a blizzard

a blizzard furies of fractured vision punctured pillows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/21/2011 8:32:00 AM
Good way of describing a snow storm as a pillow fight in heaven.
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Date: 1/19/2011 11:28:00 AM
Wonderful description in this one, Deb! I can see how clouds would appear to be "punctured pillows" when heavy snow is falling. Best wishes if this is the one you entered in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 10:35:00 AM
Excellent Haiku, these of your's I've been reading. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:28:00 AM
Intensely descriptive lines Deb.. good luck in the contest... the alliteration is a plus my friend.. luv..
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:59:00 PM
Very meaningful haiku with apt images, deb
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Date: 1/18/2011 2:28:00 PM
Love it Deb, and very clever describing the fresh snow as pillows. It's virginal carpet will welcome many of natures gems after it's fall. Terrific Haiku....:)
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