A Blizzard

a blizzard
furies of fractured vision
punctured pillows

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2011 8:32:00 AM

Good way of describing a snow storm as a pillow fight in heaven.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/19/2011 11:28:00 AM

Wonderful description in this one, Deb! I can see how clouds would appear to be "punctured pillows" when heavy snow is falling. Best wishes if this is the one you entered in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 1/19/2011 10:35:00 AM

Excellent Haiku, these of your's I've been reading. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 6:28:00 AM

Intensely descriptive lines Deb.. good luck in the contest... the alliteration is a plus my friend.. luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/18/2011 5:59:00 PM

Very meaningful haiku with apt images, deb

James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 2:28:00 PM

Love it Deb, and very clever describing the fresh snow as pillows. It's virginal carpet will welcome many of natures gems after it's fall. Terrific Haiku....:)