A Blizzard

a blizzard
furies of fractured vision
punctured pillows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Pettit Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Good way of describing a snow storm as a pillow fight in heaven.
Devonshire Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 11:28 AM
Wonderful description in this one, Deb! I can see how clouds would appear to be "punctured pillows" when heavy snow is falling. Best wishes if this is the one you entered in Charles' contest. Love, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Excellent Haiku, these of your's I've been reading. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
January 19, 2011 at 6:28 AM
Intensely descriptive lines Deb.. good luck in the contest... the alliteration is a plus my friend.. luv..
Mehta Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 5:59 PM
Very meaningful haiku with apt images, deb
Fraser Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Love it Deb, and very clever describing the fresh snow as pillows. It's virginal carpet will welcome many of natures gems after it's fall. Terrific Haiku....:)
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