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A Blissful Ending

I poured my soul, in a page or two-for a few- While I release my self, from the anguish of having to deal with my handwriting. I poured myself from my bed; reluctant to the fact; that I believed all the while what I wrote. I poured my self from my life. I tackled the purpose of how dreadful it must seem, writing myself- from the very purpose I tried reway from. Dreading the moment of being ignored- or worst- Lost! Lost beyond the valley of the desert, or the sea of blood, that I had poured through the funnel of my heart. A heart which was broken, from the time you left, From the moment you arrived, you only brought back pain. Pain in which I poured out from my soul, Into writing on this page.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2009 6:28:00 AM
Merisha - You expressed your emotions very well in this poem - Sounds like you have a lot of conflicting emotions regarding your love - Stay Strong and remember to take care of you first - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:41:00 AM
Lots of emotion in this and your imagery was excellent. I love this part: "Dreading the moment of being ignored- or worst- Lost!" I can relate and it really hit me, when I read your words, how much truth is in that. Awesome writing. Blessings... Amy
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:08:00 AM
I am drinking up this poem. Love the flow of the piece and the emotions in it..love the imagery..and the ending rocks. Nice work.
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