A Blissful Ending

I poured my soul,
in a page or two-for a few-
While I release my self,
from the anguish of having to deal with my handwriting.

I poured myself from my bed; reluctant to the fact;
that I believed all the while what I wrote.

I poured my self from my life.

I tackled the purpose of how dreadful it must seem,
writing myself-
from the very purpose I tried reway from.

Dreading the moment of being ignored- or worst- Lost!

Lost beyond the valley of the desert,
or the sea of blood,
that I had poured through the funnel of my heart.

A heart which was broken,
from the time you left,
From the moment you arrived,
you only brought back pain.

Pain in which I poured out from my soul,
Into writing on this page.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/11/2009 6:28:00 AM
Merisha - You expressed your emotions very well in this poem - Sounds like you have a lot of conflicting emotions regarding your love - Stay Strong and remember to take care of you first - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 10:41:00 AM
Lots of emotion in this and your imagery was excellent. I love this part: "Dreading the moment of being ignored- or worst- Lost!" I can relate and it really hit me, when I read your words, how much truth is in that. Awesome writing. Blessings... Amy
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:08:00 AM
I am drinking up this poem. Love the flow of the piece and the emotions in it..love the imagery..and the ending rocks. Nice work.
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