A Blanket of Love

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Two hearts forever tethered to each other, fear, which one, Death, will visit first. And as time passes, a sadness swells within our hearts, thinking about it. Acceptance of the inevitability of the other's death; triggers apprehension, a very human experience. And such concerns can overwhelm conjoined hearts; proving love is a two-edged sword. Memories entertain like-minded minds, sharing theaters of recognition. And watching old family films of days gone by; chuckle, recalling long-forgotten escapades of a lifetime of dreams, we equally shared. Having lived full lives with no regrets two half souls fused into one; warmly wrapped in a blanket of love. Fond thoughts oft drift to yesteryears; trying to offset the tide of tears that start to ebb and flow as the last years unfold. The question of who will die first; fuels fear of uncertainty within both our hearts. When my time comes to pass, I'll close my eyes, let out a breath, and, with a sigh, slip away! Dying's not the scary part; leaving my soulmate behind, is!

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Date: 3/22/2018 7:24:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Emile for your fantastic win with your tender and poignant love poem. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 3/23/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 4:26:00 PM
Ebb and flow of uncertainty is more frightening, than dying, I agree. Agree on all the comments given to you, just can't say it as well. Big Congrats!
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:46:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, I think you say it very well, for I can feel the integrity of your words my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Emile with your beautifully written poem which I can certainly relate. :))
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thanks Roy, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 11:39:00 AM
How beautifully you express the depth of mature love and the inevitable thoughts of death, Emile. Love this wonderful poem! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 6:09:00 AM
such truth. So passionate and romantic about the lifelong love two people can share. A fear I have many times thought of. great poem...thank you and congratulations! :)-luloo
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Laura, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/3/2018 1:28:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
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Date: 3/3/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/27/2018 7:24:00 PM
Oh such a tender and poignant poem Emile, delivered in heartfelt poetic lines throughout but your last line is simply outstanding. Beautiful poetry! Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/28/2018 10:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan, I truly appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/27/2018 10:58:00 AM
A lovely write. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/27/2018 12:47:00 PM
Thanks Janis, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/27/2018 9:43:00 AM
A very nostalgic write Emile, that pulled at the heartstrings more than you know, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 2/27/2018 10:40:00 AM
Thank you John, I appreciate both the placing and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/2/2018 8:43:00 PM
Wow - what a poignant write. Superb, Emile. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 2/3/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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