A Bitter Plight

There, watch, the clouds part and light shafts blackest night
particles of doss drift through a ray of white.

Ah, revelation unasked for, and unwanted,
coming endlessly unasked, and never daunted.

I see the bitter blight of man's neglect lay
upon the once fertile field of summer hay.

I see a mighty ocean writhe and foam, die
and n'er a voice is lifted, n'er an angry cry.  

I see children put their parents out to die
and parents who accost their children with lies.

Ah, revelation unasked for, and unwanted,
coming endlessly unasked, never daunted.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/18/2013 6:13:00 AM
Debbie...you say a lot here. It's deep and meaningful. Outstanding!
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Date: 2/16/2013 4:50:00 AM
wonderful write..i liked it.
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Date: 2/15/2013 7:23:00 AM
Perfect! This is art, hon. Hope it tops the list. I gave it a go (a 360 take on yours) but wrote it too late, which is a-okay, cause we both know its all about the write... still...I do want to see you take home a gold for this. Bold. Deep. xox Dee (long weekend here. Family weekend. LOL.. which means MORE work for me, in a way... more meals, dishes, and the two of them can destroy a room in 0.2 seconds.... still, we are having lunch OUT. A treat for moi)
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Date: 2/15/2013 1:45:00 AM
Beautifully woven words. A powerful revelation.
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Date: 2/14/2013 5:05:00 PM
Ah, you see much, mon cher...The children-parent verse is a true stunner...'revelation unasked for'...how very true - Tim
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:22:00 PM
This is an awesome poem and point...
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Date: 2/14/2013 7:52:00 AM
I like this one a lot. I think it will do well. Soup mail
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Date: 2/14/2013 4:00:00 AM
Debbie very very powerful, a strong picture...David
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Date: 2/14/2013 3:36:00 AM
Very well written, Debbie. - Have a sweet heart day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2013 11:06:00 PM
A profound write, Debbie. You are doing just what the prophets of old did with revelations....voicing them so that change can take place. God bless.
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