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A Bit Blue

A Bit Blue Just as the birds sing in the morning and the children play in the evening as all in their days through. No matter how I feel they have a good day. So, with each, I know of this to be true. I find I am not so blue, knowing just what they do. I say I love you through my window on Life’s view. If there are some other ways to so do, knowing of life as you do. I’ll say, tell me more of such life’s to do’s? From your windows on life’s view no longer being blue.

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Date: 5/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
Finding ways to bea the blues, Nicely done John..
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John Hardison
Date: 5/24/2020 11:25:00 AM
Thank Much for you appraisal. Most helpful. As a personal matter of Christian Faith, I should turn the blues over to him. Just don't think of it soon enough. So it is from my window on life view I will see the nature beauty and children first. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 5/21/2020 10:52:00 PM
I like the theme to your verse, great flow, and rhyme, John. Just to look out the window and watch life play with its joyful hues. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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John Hardison
Date: 5/21/2020 11:13:00 PM
Thanks much for your thoughtful comment. If I have it right: Kids are called the spice of life. Seniors (just) old and wise. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 5/20/2020 10:58:00 PM
Well said John. Whenever I feel like I don't want to go to work I remind myself of how many people wish they had a job and can't get one. If I am feeling sorry for myself I remind myself that somewhere someone has it much worse than me. Good write. God Bless, JB
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John Hardison
Date: 5/21/2020 11:40:00 AM
Much thanks. I appreciate your comment A long standing rhyme for the blues, I too often forget is: To get over the blues turn them over to God and see what he can do only to find his love is true. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 5/20/2020 6:39:00 PM
this is short and sweet. Just how I like them!
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John Hardison
Date: 5/20/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Because of poor spelling days long after schooling and before computer, spelling ace or word processer I had to be short and sweet in writing to have ease and hide my frustration leaves. Still prefer short writings to match my now short memory. I am not an acceptation. Much enjoy your poems. My best you. (Essay over). Peace, Love and Joy always!