A Bit Blue

A Bit Blue

Just as the birds sing in the morning and
the children play in the evening as all in
their days through. No matter how I feel
they have a good day.

So, with each, I know of this to be true. I find
I am not so blue, knowing just what they do.
I say I love you through my window
on Life’s view.

If there are some other ways to so do, knowing 
of life as you do. I’ll say, tell me more of such life’s
to do’s? From your windows on life’s view 
no longer being blue.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/19/2023 9:31:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 1/2/2021 4:29:00 AM
when you look out that window, mayit always bring you joy and peace, so much to see, so much to insip, Thank you for sharing.
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John Hardison
Date: 1/6/2021 9:53:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. The very young always have a fresh view point. God Bless. Have a great New Year. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 6/10/2020 7:38:00 AM
A wonderful piece of writing dear, John. Blessings my friend.
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John Hardison
Date: 6/11/2020 11:15:00 AM
Thank for you comment. For young kids it's always new. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 6/10/2020 4:18:00 AM
I say I love you through my window on Life’s view... Beautifully penned John.. Lots of positivity in a different world.. Takecare always..
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John Hardison
Date: 6/11/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Birds can't sing the blues. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 5/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
Finding ways to bea the blues, Nicely done John..
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John Hardison
Date: 5/24/2020 11:25:00 AM
Thank Much for you appraisal. Most helpful. As a personal matter of Christian Faith, I should turn the blues over to him. Just don't think of it soon enough. So it is from my window on life view I will see the nature beauty and children first. Peace, Love and Joy.
Date: 5/21/2020 10:52:00 PM
I like the theme to your verse, great flow, and rhyme, John. Just to look out the window and watch life play with its joyful hues. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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John Hardison
Date: 5/21/2020 11:13:00 PM
Thanks much for your thoughtful comment. If I have it right: Kids are called the spice of life. Seniors (just) old and wise. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 5/20/2020 10:58:00 PM
Well said John. Whenever I feel like I don't want to go to work I remind myself of how many people wish they had a job and can't get one. If I am feeling sorry for myself I remind myself that somewhere someone has it much worse than me. Good write. God Bless, JB
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John Hardison
Date: 5/21/2020 11:40:00 AM
Much thanks. I appreciate your comment A long standing rhyme for the blues, I too often forget is: To get over the blues turn them over to God and see what he can do only to find his love is true. Peace, Love and Joy
Date: 5/20/2020 6:39:00 PM
this is short and sweet. Just how I like them!
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John Hardison
Date: 5/20/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. Because of poor spelling days long after schooling and before computer, spelling ace or word processer I had to be short and sweet in writing to have ease and hide my frustration leaves. Still prefer short writings to match my now short memory. I am not an acceptation. Much enjoy your poems. My best you. (Essay over). Peace, Love and Joy always!
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