A Bird's Sigh

Green quill glides down from gray sky
Sweet song sung soft on branch high 
Is she cried for her lost love?
While he lay down, a grave sigh.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 7:01 PM
Cute little tragedy penned here, Jenish. Touching! ~ Chirp, chirp
Somadas Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 11:00 PM
Thank you Gershon.. Always happy to hear from you..
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 5:07 PM
oh so sad, and excellently portrays the picture, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 10:23 PM
Thank you Andrea for those kind words..
Sands Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 6:37 AM
Great poem. I can feel this one too. Well done :)
Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Thank you Heidi...
Mchattie Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 8:18 PM
Lovely poem. The picture reminds me of when My wife gives me crap.Have a great day my friend.
Somadas Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:58 PM
Thank you David...
Romios Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:24 AM
Jenish! Very touching. Your image matches ths dramatic poem . Very pleased with this Panagiota xx
Somadas Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 11:41 AM
Thank you for that delightful comment Panagiota..
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 7:11 AM
I see it gliding --and--hear the sigh. Your photo says it all!
Somadas Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Thank you Vijay for your supporting words...
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 12:17 AM
Lovely, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 12:20 AM
Thank you Line..
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