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A Bird's Sigh

Green quill glides down from gray sky Sweet song sung soft on branch high Is she cried for her lost love? While he lay down, a grave sigh.

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Date: 3/12/2020 7:01:00 PM

Cute little tragedy penned here, Jenish. Touching! ~ Chirp, chirp

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 11:00:00 PM

Thank you Gershon.. Always happy to hear from you..

Date: 3/11/2020 5:07:00 PM

oh so sad, and excellently portrays the picture, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/11/2020 10:23:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for those kind words..

Date: 3/11/2020 6:37:00 AM

Great poem. I can feel this one too. Well done :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/11/2020 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Heidi...

Date: 3/10/2020 8:18:00 PM

Lovely poem. The picture reminds me of when My wife gives me crap.Have a great day my friend.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/10/2020 11:58:00 PM

Thank you David...

Date: 3/10/2020 11:24:00 AM

Jenish! Very touching. Your image matches ths dramatic poem . Very pleased with this Panagiota xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/10/2020 11:41:00 AM

Thank you for that delightful comment Panagiota..

Date: 3/10/2020 7:11:00 AM

I see it gliding --and--hear the sigh. Your photo says it all!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/10/2020 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Vijay for your supporting words...

Date: 3/10/2020 12:17:00 AM

Lovely, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/10/2020 12:20:00 AM

Thank you Line..