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A Bird's Paradise - POTD

Wintry days were turning mild.
After the harsh stormy days.
     Still not a sound could be heard
     Except the hammering of posts
As I prepared the bird feeders.
Surely it was time for their return.

Yet not a sound could I detect that evening.
So I filled the feeders with delicious seed
And went for my usual long night sleep.

     But with dawn I was wide awake
     For then the garden began to fill with song.

Two male scarlet tanagers settled on an oak 
On the other side of the street.
     I was thrilled even though 
    Their song sounded a bit hoarse.
Bluebirds sang a lively tune 
As they fed on worms.

But what pleased me most 
Was to see two meadowlarks,
     The male feeding the female 
     As she sat on an old nest.
This spring was full of promise. 

A bird’s paradise.

20 February 2021

Spring Birds Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France


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Fenn Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:28 PM
What a beautiful poem! Birds are very verse-inspiring aren’t they? I also like “To be a Bird”. In fact I liked all your poems that came in my email inbox today. You are a very versatile poet. Congratulations on your Lifetime Membership.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:11 AM
Hello Victor, I want to tell you how wonderful this poem is. As i read this poem, I felt like I was there listening to the birds songs. Victor my fav. Enjoy your day my friend.
Calasibetta Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Victor what an absolutely breathtaking poem. Your imagery, cinematic!!! Congratulations! Blessings, Paulette
Kulkarni Avatar
March 10, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Beautiful poem Victor!!
Capitano Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Congrats Victor on winning with this charming poem of spring and hope. Rock on.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 11:38 AM
- Congratulations, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 10:50 AM
How special it must have been to see one meadowlark feeding the other in the nest. Nicely done, Victor. Congrats on your POTD and your win in the contest! Hugs, carolyn
La France Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Spring Birds Challenge with this lovely poem, I like it a lot and your image is wonderful, well done _Constance
Gilmour Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:21 AM
Many congratulations dear Victor on your POTD with this beautiful poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Rodrigues Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
Nicole Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 8:24 PM
"The garden began to fill with song" Which means Spring is in the air. :) This is so beautiful and uplifting. You paint such vivid images with your words. My heart is smiling. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Theraven Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Victor, A wonderful entry for Constance' contest. A bird's paradise in lovely song of Spring. "Alouette, gentille alouette, Alouette, je te plumerai." -Richard
Y. Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 5:43 PM
WoW! Victor, This is a lovely entry for the contest. Good content and imagery. Best wishes in the in contest. Congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Downing  Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Truly beautiful, Vic, and congratulations on potd...
Kitchin Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Victor, congratulations on POTD, a beautiful bird poem!
Proxenos Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, you wrote a poem as if you were in the middle of a beautiful field of nature - Congratulations Victor for POTD, truly deserved. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
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February 21, 2021 at 9:38 AM
What a lovely and tender picture of love even among birds, Victor! Congratulations on your POTD with this gentle picture of "spring" "promise." We love watching the birds return in spring - all gathered around our feeder. All the best.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 9:37 AM
I loved the hope and joy of nature in this beautiful poem Victor. Congratulations on your well deserved honor of receiving POTD my friend! Blessings xxoo
Jayasankar Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 9:28 AM
This is too good and perfect for the contest. A poem full of hope and promise of spring. Well deserved POTD Victor. Congrats and God bless.. ~ Ani
Roper Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Back with big congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Michael Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 9:07 AM
You're completely in the poem...Nice imagery...Congratulations Victor Buhagiar. on POTD
Calasibetta Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 8:41 AM
Lovely piece, embracing the “a bird’s paradise”. I can hear the music, and see the meadow larks. Kudos.
Ball Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 8:09 AM
I do love the birds and the male bird feeding his mate was so sweet. Love it. Another fave for me. Congrats on POTD. God Bless, JB
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 7:50 AM
Beautiful! Congrats on POTD
Wolf Avatar
February 21, 2021 at 7:48 AM
Can I 'worm my way in here' to congratulate you on POTD, Victor?! Way to go! ~ Bird of Paradise
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