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A Bird of Note

It may seem a trifle to the horde - Or perhaps mere mordacious wit. But I, wizened more than most afford, Was not shackled by some rhyme unfit. He let his brain loiter as he wrote - Hoping his pen would elicit praise. "Cartridge", said he, "is a bird of note" But I've put one in guns all my days 4/1/2017 For contest Eight Word Challenge

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Date: 4/9/2017 1:40:00 PM
Like your sense of humor don't think most would catch it, but great poem, congrats on a fine win!
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/12/2017 10:10:00 AM
I'm having a few songs worked on, have a few singers in mind, things progressing slowly but surely.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/9/2017 9:34:00 PM
I wondered if it was a little too subtle, too,,thanks for the comment! What's happening with your music publication?
Date: 4/9/2017 2:31:00 AM
To a certain extent, I think we all hope our pens elicit praise! Congratulations on your win!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/9/2017 9:32:00 PM
Thank you, John!

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