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A Bird In the Tree

Twas a bird in the tree across the street staring at me from the uppermost limb It seemed he was intently watching me perhaps as curious of me as I of him I think he was squawking profanities though I wasn’t sure of his tweets and hoots It appeared that he might be the jealous sort envious of me in my fur coat and warm boots I’m pretty sure it was envy he felt from the sad look I could see on his face For he had naught but feathers to warm him and no way to escape winter’s embrace We both decided it was time to leave As I could feel the day getting colder I stood to leave and felt his parting gift splatter across my new coat’s shoulder

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Date: 9/13/2023 2:18:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem Jerry. Suppose to bring good luck. Did you buy a lottery ticket by any chance lol?. Thank you for brightening my day. Emilia : )
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/13/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by Emilia. All I got out of it was a dry-cleaning bill. But I guess I was lucky that I wasn't looking up as I walked away.
Date: 9/6/2023 10:55:00 AM
And how would he feel likewise if you ruined his “coat” LOL!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/6/2023 6:00:00 PM
Right... what did I do to him.
Date: 9/6/2023 10:13:00 AM
tsk tsk, that bird is not very nice, :(
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/6/2023 5:57:00 PM
That will teach me not to sit under a tree.
Date: 9/6/2023 9:45:00 AM
oh gosh I better be careful I dont want to lose my poetry soup poop crown just yet - thanks for the smiles Jerry, love the twist at the end:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2023 6:39:00 PM
hmmm Poop - Scoop of the day lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/6/2023 5:56:00 PM
No worries my friend. I still bow to the queen of Poetry Soup Poop. Maybe you should start a newsletter. I'd follow it.
Date: 9/2/2023 6:46:00 AM
LoL great poem Jerry. Love the funny turn at the end :)
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/5/2023 6:28:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. One can never go wrong with a little dirty bird humor.
Date: 9/1/2023 7:28:00 PM
what a punch line, great, birds are so curious for people, they care have a great sunday poet Yann
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/5/2023 6:30:00 PM
Thanks Yann. Just got back from vacation.
Date: 8/29/2023 6:52:00 PM
LoL what a punch line! I loved it. All of it. better than being bored. I actually could visualize it.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/5/2023 6:31:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Appreciate the visit.
Date: 8/29/2023 12:17:00 AM
Hilarious Jerry and good luck they say! Did you feel lucky? Enjoyed….Debx
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/5/2023 6:32:00 PM
I'm sure it wasn't luck I said. but you got it 3/4 right.
Date: 8/28/2023 5:33:00 AM
Beautiful rhymes and i love the creative way you’ve written this. Made me laugh too. So good! Power of words, you get readers to feel so much. Brilliant
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 9/5/2023 6:33:00 PM
Thanks for such kind words.
Date: 8/27/2023 6:47:00 AM
THANKS,,,I NEEDED THAT!!!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 8/27/2023 11:28:00 AM
Glad I could be of service.
Date: 8/26/2023 11:09:00 PM
hahahahah I love the ending and the humor!!!!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 8/27/2023 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Aurore, for dropping by. Have a wonderful day.

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