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Poetry/Shape/A Bird Flying
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1568-309-07
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written August 07, 2023
For the International Contest, No 1235 New Poems Only
Sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 08/13/2023

Third Place

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the bird comes flying high soaring, drifting falling from the sky is he bring a message for only me to know drifting down, down perhaps from mom perhaps from my dad from my grandma the bird flies low, low I love his swirling lovely dance then, a wind current takes him up does he know how beautiful he is Oh how, I wish that I could float in the sky like a wild bird his bright eyes are looking at me! I imagine him a long lost friend now, he plummets downward and calls out so loudly send your poetry sweet poet girl, so I close my eyes and poems fly and I leave earth flapping my wings twirling, spinning whirling up then down then up

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Date: 9/16/2023 1:41:00 PM
Fantastic poem!
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Date: 9/16/2023 2:50:00 PM
Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment, these shape poems are hard to do.
Date: 8/13/2023 10:37:00 AM
- Constance, congratulations on your lovely win poem :) - hugs
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Date: 8/15/2023 3:19:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, hugs and blessings !
Date: 8/12/2023 7:24:00 PM
Very imaginative. Superb bird image in full flight. When I use my cellphone to create a visual poem I get a muck up. A tip of the hat to those with graphic skills. Congratulations! Brian
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2023 3:20:00 PM
Brian, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congratulation, I think they can only be done on a computer, blessings !
Date: 8/12/2023 7:00:00 PM
Your words flow as the wind that carries this message. Love It.!!! Lonna
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2023 3:21:00 PM
Lonna, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings !
Date: 8/12/2023 11:04:00 AM
This is so cool!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2023 3:21:00 PM
Paloma, thank you so much for the compliment, blessings !
Date: 8/8/2023 9:59:00 AM
: ) this is a masterpiece in just the image, and you have written this beautiful poem within it : )
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Constance La France
Date: 8/8/2023 4:11:00 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment on the image and the poem, appreciate, blessings !
Date: 8/8/2023 1:45:00 AM
Wow.... this is fantastic.... ! Beautiful image and a lovely poem ! You are a bird flying high on the wings of poesy! All the Best Constance!
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Date: 8/8/2023 4:11:00 PM
Valsa, thank you for the compliment on the image and poem and the lovely comment, blessings !
Date: 8/7/2023 4:41:00 PM
Wow, this is terrific. A very enjoyable shape to read!
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Constance La France
Date: 8/8/2023 4:12:00 PM
David, thank you so much for the compliment and the comment, blessings !

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