A Big Step To Heaven

Dreaming of the day when I reach my heaven,
I've just taken the first big step forward.
I've decided not to look away from a reality like a heat haze.
Even if I can't find any light anywhere.
Do I have a promising future?
Only fighting is what pushes me forward.
I know that's a weird way to live, although that's all I can do.
I'm always struggling.
Dreaming of the day when I reach my heaven,
I've just taken the first big step forward.
I've decided not to look away from a reality like a heat haze.
Even if I can't find any light anywhere.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Zarooni Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 3:39 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome, i wish you will enjoy my other peoms...
Brown Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 3:30 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Saud. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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January 11, 2010 at 10:53 PM
The first step is the most important one, sometimes the hardest one. May your journey be one to bring you much enlightenment and the elements that make Heaven. Very nice write, inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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