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Unacceptable-- implementing climbing skills at the Capitol January 14, 2021 entered in the Senryu--Humorous, Satirical, or Dark Poetry Contest placed 3rd Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2021 8:15:00 PM

Excellent senryu, Janice. Honestly surprised it didn't place higher, as you managed to pen a poem that was both dark and humorous (honestly!) in three short lines. Bravo! Well-done! :) gw

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/18/2021 6:30:00 AM

Gershon, THANKS a million! Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/15/2021 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Janice - truly unacceptable, awesome Senryu. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice

Mark Koplin

Date: 1/15/2021 5:20:00 AM

Making things great I guess, Congrats on your win!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:25:00 AM

I'm praying they won't try to "make things great" again on inauguration day! Thanks, Mark. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 3:01:00 AM

- Unacceptable !!! - Congratulations on your win, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:23:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/14/2021 6:49:00 PM

at least some of them are wearing masks ~

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:23:00 AM

Yes! Thanks so much, Line. :-) Janice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/14/2021 5:01:00 PM

I was working so it was all over by the time I knew about it. Congratulations, Janice!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:22:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim. Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2021 3:28:00 PM

Back with congrats Janice Tom

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:21:00 AM

Thanks so much, Tom Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 3:16:00 PM

Dropping back with many congrats Janice:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:21:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2021 1:14:00 PM

great satire. Congrats on the win.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:20:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/14/2021 1:07:00 PM

well-said, janice! if only that were the worst of it...

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:19:00 AM

Thanks, Ilene! I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/14/2021 12:27:00 PM

Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem!

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:18:00 AM

Tania, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/14/2021 8:37:00 AM

Well said, Janice--shameful display of attack on our democracy.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:09:00 AM

Yes, absolutely mortifying. Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/14/2021 7:01:00 AM

Couldn't believe what I was seeing Janice, I hope we never witness attacks on democracy in the western world again. Tom

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:08:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice

Jan Allison

Date: 1/14/2021 6:34:00 AM

spot on Janice... lets hope we never see the likes of this again it sent shock waves across the world:-( hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:06:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice