A Big No-No For Civilians

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Police, military and public officials who attended D.C. riot face reckoning  | The Japan Times

Unacceptable-- implementing climbing skills at the Capitol
January 14, 2021 entered in the Senryu--Humorous, Satirical, or Dark Poetry Contest placed 3rd Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/16/2021 8:15:00 PM
Excellent senryu, Janice. Honestly surprised it didn't place higher, as you managed to pen a poem that was both dark and humorous (honestly!) in three short lines. Bravo! Well-done! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/18/2021 6:30:00 AM
Gershon, THANKS a million! Janice
Date: 1/15/2021 9:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Janice - truly unacceptable, awesome Senryu. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:26:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jennifer. Janice
Date: 1/15/2021 5:20:00 AM
Making things great I guess, Congrats on your win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:25:00 AM
I'm praying they won't try to "make things great" again on inauguration day! Thanks, Mark. Janice
Date: 1/15/2021 3:01:00 AM
- Unacceptable !!! - Congratulations on your win, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:23:00 AM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 6:49:00 PM
at least some of them are wearing masks ~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:23:00 AM
Yes! Thanks so much, Line. :-) Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 5:01:00 PM
I was working so it was all over by the time I knew about it. Congratulations, Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 3:28:00 PM
Back with congrats Janice Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tom Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 3:16:00 PM
Dropping back with many congrats Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 1:14:00 PM
great satire. Congrats on the win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 1:07:00 PM
well-said, janice! if only that were the worst of it...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thanks, Ilene! I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 12:27:00 PM
Janice, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever poem!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:18:00 AM
Tania, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my placement! Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 8:37:00 AM
Well said, Janice--shameful display of attack on our democracy.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:09:00 AM
Yes, absolutely mortifying. Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 7:01:00 AM
Couldn't believe what I was seeing Janice, I hope we never witness attacks on democracy in the western world again. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice
Date: 1/14/2021 6:34:00 AM
spot on Janice... lets hope we never see the likes of this again it sent shock waves across the world:-( hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/16/2021 7:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan. I'm praying nothing goes awry on inauguration day! Janice
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