A Big Gain

There once was a man whose big gain
of weight was now shockingly plain.
When he went for a dip
all the others would quip,
“Let's land on him, claim him for Spain!”

8/28/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:35 PM
wow, this is fantastic. Was it in that latest limerick contest?? I don't see any congrats, so I FAVE it.
Cozart Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 1:10 PM
Thanks very much, Andrea. Yes, it was in the contest.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 9:40 AM
OOOOhhhhhhh I have to read this again. I may have missed something. Okay. Third time is a charm, right?
Cozart Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:31 AM
Hi, Caren. Thanks for reading.
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