A Better Tomorrow

Splendid past cherished with ardent moments,
Quest and thirst for wisdom transformed the world.
Service and solace were their rudiments,
Growth and values were together mingled.

The predicament present of evils,
Corruption and bias are the fetters.
Dreaded thunderbolts on humane morals,
Awake and break the disgraceful shutters.

Empathy survives and comforts people
Parity - the precept of universe,
Curtails nasty thoughts those make us feeble,
Don't get perished by the merciless curse.

A better tomorrow with perfections,
Fuse the fragrance of love to our actions.


A better tomorrow Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: John Hamilton 
Date: 22-09-2020

Place : 4th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Koplin Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Very happy and thanks for the compliments
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 8:48 AM
An interesting entry Patri, I think the first time reading you, if your rhymes were more accurate you would have placed higher, congrats on placing in my contest!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 8:47 AM
Points taken. Glad and thanks for the support and encouragement.
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