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A Better Tomorrow

Splendid past cherished with ardent moments, Quest and thirst for wisdom transformed the world. Service and solace were their rudiments, Growth and values were together mingled. The predicament present of evils, Corruption and bias are the fetters. Dreaded thunderbolts on humane morals, Awake and break the disgraceful shutters. Empathy survives and comforts people Parity - the precept of universe, Curtails nasty thoughts those make us feeble, Don't get perished by the merciless curse. A better tomorrow with perfections, Fuse the fragrance of love to our actions. A better tomorrow Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Hamilton Date: 22-09-2020 Place : 4th

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Date: 9/29/2020 5:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/29/2020 8:48:00 AM
Very happy and thanks for the compliments
Date: 9/28/2020 8:48:00 AM
An interesting entry Patri, I think the first time reading you, if your rhymes were more accurate you would have placed higher, congrats on placing in my contest!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/29/2020 8:47:00 AM
Points taken. Glad and thanks for the support and encouragement.

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