A Better Tommorow

Impressed of what kind of things she brings to the 
table and able to keep her compuser of how her beauty 
is one of the essentials that make her so unique& Beautiful
my days of sadness and parchment  are finally finished 
standing in the rain with no one to hold looking around 
to see who will keep me warm in the cold
crushed on the inside because I wonder if I am 
being blunt or bold.
Constantly  being reminded 
if I truly know what I want
my answer to that will be her,
people give me strange looks & as my
mind drifts into the abyss
of her beauty 
Drowning trying to make my way out
 but my result us failure 
yet I open my eyes to witness that she is
standing by my side
and to raise my hand in glory
that i have  achieved success
Watching her smile 
brings smile to my heart
sometimes it is so hard to say good bye 
because its already a problem that we live in
2 distinguished states
in which set us apart.
Taking no isnt exceptable in my book
look, i want you to be my eve & i will be your adam
be the man  who puts the ring on your finger 
and call you his beautiful madam. 
once again you discovered a side of me in which no other has 
ever brought out on meb recreating 
a cinderella story where the fun ends at midnight 
invisible to the eye and obvious to the touch the day will finally set 
for the my queen to be crowned.
******* TO BE CONTINUED*******

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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